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[sid] => 51527
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[aid] => mick
[title] => This endless fight gets me no where
[time] => 2004-06-12 03:31:07
[hometext] => I think about suicide all the time now...sometimes I wanna try again...???
[bodytext] => Every night
I use to cry
and hope some day
I'd end it and die
I dont see why I'm living today
everyone tells me
"it will be okay"
but they are only sympathizing
in what they dont know
they act only upon what it is I show
I hate this act
I put upon my face
I use it I dont know why..
its such a waste
I'm feeling
hopeless
lost
dazed
and confused
I look at the blade and
see what wrist I should choose
forgive me father for I have sinned;
are my last words that are settled in the wind
my suicide note states
that I'm sorry
but I'm not alive to know
if you accept
just know that
I cared
I loved
and was me
don't act like this wasnt meant to be
I knew it was
you just wouldn't admit
that you knew
I knew
that this
was it
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 234
[topic] => 36
[informant] => Living_In_My_Dream
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 19
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
)
This endless fight gets me no where
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:31:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Every night
I use to cry
and hope some day
I'd end it and die
I dont see why I'm living today
everyone tells me
"it will be okay"
but they are only sympathizing
in what they dont know
they act only upon what it is I show
I hate this act
I put upon my face
I use it I dont know why..
its such a waste
I'm feeling
hopeless
lost
dazed
and confused
I look at the blade and
see what wrist I should choose
forgive me father for I have sinned;
are my last words that are settled in the wind
my suicide note states
that I'm sorry
but I'm not alive to know
if you accept
just know that
I cared
I loved
and was me
don't act like this wasnt meant to be
I knew it was
you just wouldn't admit
that you knew
I knew
that this
was it
Copyright ©
Living_In_My_Dream
... [
2004-06-12 03:31:07]
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Re: This endless fight gets me no where
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:34:37 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
I pray this is jus writing and that you didn't really do it.
It would be so sad to loose such a good writer.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: This endless fight gets me no where
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by lonelywolf04 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:47:41 AM AEST
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| iv been there and im getin back there but u do know that some1 that is realy wantin to kil them self wont tell any1 or write a note they just do it but i dont relay thank u will do it |
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Re: This endless fight gets me no where
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by Archie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:56:29 AM AEST
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| So when are you gonna show some one the real you so that we can act on what is there and not just what you show us?! |
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Re: This endless fight gets me no where
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by wray on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:22:48 AM AEST
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| I think the fact that you're still here and you're writing about it means that your life isn't totally hopeless and you know it. It's just a matter of deciding what to live for. Nearly everyone feels like this at some stage in their lives. You'll be OK in the end, whenever that may be. |
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Re: This endless fight gets me no where
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:09:37 AM AEST
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i don't know what to say about this, apart from...
I FEEELYOUR PAIN!!! |
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Re: This endless fight gets me no where
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by pixie on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:40:51 AM AEST
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I have also been where you are and I couldn't see any other way out , but I have survived it and I know that you can too, you are expressing your feelings well in your poems, they will help you to get through this, as will all the people on here, all you need to do is ask and you will recieve the help you need. I am posting a poem on in a few hours its a dedication to all those who have tried or are thinking about suicide, I would really love you to read it,
takecare
Pixie xx |
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Re: This endless fight gets me no where
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:25:13 PM AEST
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These thoughts haunt me as well... suicide is issue to some poeple, they consider it a way out, an easy way to escape from the problems they face. but its a demonstraton of weakness, and you are not weak. you are a strong person and you have an amazing talent that you must continue to share with the world. I know it can be tough but keep your chin up and express it in your poems.....
you would be missed greatly....
amazing poem A+++++ |
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Re: This endless fight gets me no where
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by rugby_player on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:59:40 PM AEST
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| Good job. but i'm hoping this isn't true..i'd miss you way to much....we have only been talking for maybe abuot a week..but already you mean a lot to me...you are a really good friend you are always there for me. And in return i am always there for you..When i go to boot camp i know it will be harder for us to talk but mail does work write me and tell anything you want....Keep it cool i'm here for you...GREAT JOB on this one shows a lot of pain and emotion...Love ya..bye bye |
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