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Array ( [sid] => 5150 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Title [time] => 2002-10-16 06:00:00 [hometext] => I wrote this for a person who was thinking of abortion! After she read this she did'nt do it thank goodness! [bodytext] => I heard you talking today,You said you never wanted me any way!
Well If I could speak and express to you,
I might be a handful but I love you,
Even though I can't see you just yet,
You'll adore me I can just bet,
Please don't let the doctors take me away,
I'm crying inside, you can't hear what I say,
I already have all my fingers and toes,
I can smell you Mommy with my little nose,
I'm alive inside of you breathing what you breath,
Please Mommy I don't want to leave,
I'll be really good and everyday give you a kiss,
If the doctors take me away,think of what you'll miss,
I know you think that I'll be a pain,
But please Mommy let me explain,
I'm a part of you and I want to live,
I know you have a lot of love to give,
So please give me a chance,Mommy I know you'll love me,
Just let me be born, and you will soon see!
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 276 [topic] => 32 [informant] => LOWMAN613 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 33 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I heard you talking today,You said you never wanted me any way!
Well If I could speak and express to you,
I might be a handful but I love you,
Even though I can't see you just yet,
You'll adore me I can just bet,
Please don't let the doctors take me away,
I'm crying inside, you can't hear what I say,
I already have all my fingers and toes,
I can smell you Mommy with my little nose,
I'm alive inside of you breathing what you breath,
Please Mommy I don't want to leave,
I'll be really good and everyday give you a kiss,
If the doctors take me away,think of what you'll miss,
I know you think that I'll be a pain,
But please Mommy let me explain,
I'm a part of you and I want to live,
I know you have a lot of love to give,
So please give me a chance,Mommy I know you'll love me,
Just let me be born, and you will soon see!




Copyright © LOWMAN613 ... [ 2002-10-16 06:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:08:18 AM AEST
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wow... this is awesome. some of the wordings in there is kinda cheezy, but the idea of it all is quite the eye-opener. and thankfully, it helped that person make a choice she thought was the right one. if only more people could read this, because so many are struggling with this decision. you should send this out in a newsletter to people or something. it's definitely a keeper that you will want to share with everybody. a good write this is. kudos! ;0) -daniel


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by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 10:06:12 AM AEST
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What a lovely angle to come from - writing from the baby's point of view .... so sweet. I enjoyed this :))))


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by Youngster on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 10:12:42 AM AEST
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Exellent poem, I really enjoy poems with high moral value, and the pro-life issues are very close to my heart. My God Bless You!
-Wade


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by MisterRight on Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 03:48:42 AM AEST
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All I can say is WOW! Anything else will just ruin it.

Curtis


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by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 03:59:01 AM AEST
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it made me cry.. i just had an abortion a week ago and it was the worst decision i ever made.. i wish i could have read this poem sooner.


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by Former_Member on Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 12:01:19 AM AEST
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this is the mommy you helped & I will always be thankful for you,so will little Jessica!thank you!


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by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 12:08:02 PM AEST
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I'm very sorry! What ever the case I'm sure you felt you made the right choice,I am pro life,although if a person was raped That would be a tough one!!! God bless!


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by Former_Member on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 07:14:44 AM AEST
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Made me choke! How could any selfish person do this!?




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