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Array ( [sid] => 51488 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I worship you [time] => 2004-06-11 20:41:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => take my lust, heat, love, pain
sins, abuse, force, gain
you say im evil
sick in your eyes
this is love??
sensual heat, blood boiling
take the blade, cut me deep
alls demented, watch me weep
I exist to love your kind
you live to **** my mind
dirty thoughts for deviation of lies
we await confirmation from your beast within
fantasies from realities, find within me
lick my lips bite my tongue
my jewel joy you are
clench my affection
rub my inner thoughts, stimulate me
I crawl in desperation
attack my beast, devour me
take me for your bidding
steal my desires, kiss every inch of my skin
fill this emptiness within
leave me obbsessed, my fetish you are
let my sweat drip upon you, caressed clenching
I'll take the blame for my demise
you still dont see me, big surprise..... [comments] => 9 [counter] => 278 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 29 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

I worship you

Contributed by holderofthestone on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:41:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

take my lust, heat, love, pain
sins, abuse, force, gain
you say im evil
sick in your eyes
this is love??
sensual heat, blood boiling
take the blade, cut me deep
alls demented, watch me weep
I exist to love your kind
you live to **** my mind
dirty thoughts for deviation of lies
we await confirmation from your beast within
fantasies from realities, find within me
lick my lips bite my tongue
my jewel joy you are
clench my affection
rub my inner thoughts, stimulate me
I crawl in desperation
attack my beast, devour me
take me for your bidding
steal my desires, kiss every inch of my skin
fill this emptiness within
leave me obbsessed, my fetish you are
let my sweat drip upon you, caressed clenching
I'll take the blame for my demise
you still dont see me, big surprise.....

Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2004-06-11 20:41:30]
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Re: I worship you (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:54:59 PM AEST
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wow... this was amazing. really good dark emotion in this. i loved this write.
perfectly done.
keep it up.
Arden

Re: I worship you (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:56:35 PM AEST
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wow, very very very powerful, sad that you were so willing yet she wasnt there...I'm sorry that you have to write about such depressing things...it was a great write however....I love your work all masterpieces....
much love,
Dani
xoxoxo

Re: I worship you (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:24:48 PM AEST
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so much happening here.

very good write.

the voice

Re: I worship you (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:50:44 PM AEST
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Wow. I barely know how to begin to comment... This is striking... dramatic... intense. "rub my inner thoughts"... a powerful statement - just one of many in this piece.

Stunned
-SNM

Re: I worship you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 09:51:31 PM AEST
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God, I have been there and I am so glad it is over. The devastation is tremendous and you captured it perfectly. Actually brought those memories a little too close for comfort. Your work is great.

Rita

Re: I worship you (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:35:13 PM AEST
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I'm not a fan of dark poetry,but I must admit your poem had me engulfed from beginning to end.I REALLY REALLY loved this poem,I'm impressed by your talent.Keep posting,this was a great read,
PumpkinPie

Re: I worship you (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 02:50:40 AM AEST
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!!! wow!!! just... wow

Re: I worship you (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfwynd on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:34:19 PM AEST
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wow, gret poem. Full of emotion! I too will be reading your poetry and keeping my eyes open for more1 Thanks for reading mine! Wolfy x

Re: I worship you (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:41:39 PM AEST
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you stimulate me.
very good write, perfect dark sexual imagery. she doesn't know what she's missing not seeing you.

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