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Array ( [sid] => 51485 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Do I Complete You [time] => 2004-06-11 20:13:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why do I make you wish you could fly
Don't you ever feel high
My kisses are for you and you only
I never mean to mkae you feel lonely
People may live off your dreams but I wouldn't care if you lived on the street
Nobody can always stay graceful and sweet
I shouldn't hold a grudge but I have a real problem with those mean things you tend to say
But you always manage to wash the pain away
Why do I always think I've failed you
I never meant to make you feel blue
Do I complete you or do you still feel emptiness
Do I complete you even though we both cause each other stress [comments] => 2 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 48 [informant] => PsychoPrincess [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Do I Complete You

Contributed by PsychoPrincess on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:13:53 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Why do I make you wish you could fly
Don't you ever feel high
My kisses are for you and you only
I never mean to mkae you feel lonely
People may live off your dreams but I wouldn't care if you lived on the street
Nobody can always stay graceful and sweet
I shouldn't hold a grudge but I have a real problem with those mean things you tend to say
But you always manage to wash the pain away
Why do I always think I've failed you
I never meant to make you feel blue
Do I complete you or do you still feel emptiness
Do I complete you even though we both cause each other stress

Copyright © PsychoPrincess ... [ 2004-06-11 20:13:53]
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Re: Do I Complete You (User Rating: 1 )
by Insane_Outsider on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:25:12 PM AEST
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here is an opinion...

is it better to live alone, or to live with stress.

we dont need stress but we need company and love. i would suggest family instead of lover. just until you find someone more compadible. i think believing in soul mates is a good way to ease loneliness. 18 years and still havent ever had a real girlfriend, but i believe there is someone out there for me. so just hang in there and talk to those you trust for support.

by the way i enjoyed reading this write.

Re: Do I Complete You (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:47:48 PM AEST
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good write, strong words. im sure many can relate with. A+++

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