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But it was fun
And I want to do it
Again

I never was one to heal you
So I left that undone
As you, I am not fixed
Awhh, then

We can build shelter
We can house the rodents
We can care together
But we won't

Cause I never wanted to kill you
But it was fun
You never tried to fix me
So all else came undone
_

I wanted to love you
But you can't
Never could work thru
All this emotion I gave you

I wanted to be you
So I could heal me
But we couldn't be true
So I killed you

You took all my words
And burned them
I couldn't fix me
So we killed him

I wanted so much
But now that part of me is gone
I wanted to be happy
But those feeling were wrong

I wanted to love you
But you wouldn't help me
I wanted to be true
Then you went and killed me

I wanted you
I wanted you to be happy
I wanted you
I wanted you to fix me

We could of built our shelter
We could of housed the rodents
We could of been forever
But we won't

Copyright ©2004 Eric/Feanics Pulido/Kye
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House Of Rodent

Contributed by rhei76 on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 04:56:32 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I never was one to kill you
But it was fun
And I want to do it
Again

I never was one to heal you
So I left that undone
As you, I am not fixed
Awhh, then

We can build shelter
We can house the rodents
We can care together
But we won't

Cause I never wanted to kill you
But it was fun
You never tried to fix me
So all else came undone
_

I wanted to love you
But you can't
Never could work thru
All this emotion I gave you

I wanted to be you
So I could heal me
But we couldn't be true
So I killed you

You took all my words
And burned them
I couldn't fix me
So we killed him

I wanted so much
But now that part of me is gone
I wanted to be happy
But those feeling were wrong

I wanted to love you
But you wouldn't help me
I wanted to be true
Then you went and killed me

I wanted you
I wanted you to be happy
I wanted you
I wanted you to fix me

We could of built our shelter
We could of housed the rodents
We could of been forever
But we won't

Copyright ©2004 Eric/Feanics Pulido/Kye

Copyright Â© rhei76 ... [ 2004-06-11 16:56:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: House Of Rodent (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:34:13 PM AEST
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wow, good poem, thanks for sharing...

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Re: House Of Rodent (User Rating: 1 )
by buchi on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:43:52 AM AEST
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Cause I never wanted to kill you
But it was fun

wanted to love you
But you wouldn't help me
These lines are sublime...pure poetry...keep writing I like your style...

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