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I'm just a girl

I'm not a genious who makes straight a's
I'm just a student striving to learn.

I'm not an adult out on her own
I'm just a little girl who thinks she's grown

I'm not a world known speaker
I'm just a teen with something to say
who wants to be heard and not pushed away.

so open your ears
and don't close your eyes
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this is my song to the world

Contributed by purplestary on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 04:09:28 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I'm not a rock star
I'm just a girl

I'm not a genious who makes straight a's
I'm just a student striving to learn.

I'm not an adult out on her own
I'm just a little girl who thinks she's grown

I'm not a world known speaker
I'm just a teen with something to say
who wants to be heard and not pushed away.

so open your ears
and don't close your eyes
this is my song to the world!

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Re: this is my song to the world (User Rating: 1 )
by DragonLuvSong on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 05:45:07 PM AEST
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awe, its cute

Re: this is my song to the world (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 06:41:33 PM AEST
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I like this... I like the way you aknowledge yourself for who you are, and everyone has the right to be heard!

Hey look, my eyes are open and so are my ears.... talk....

Jaime

Re: this is my song to the world (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:32:05 PM AEST
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And what a beautiful song that was, a great write, keep up the good work, take care Val

Re: this is my song to the world (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:41:01 PM AEST
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Well PS.......this is marvelous for a young lady of your age. It is has style, message and grace. I'd be very proud if I were you to have written such a splendid poem when you were so young.
Thanking you so much for commenting on my frogs.........I had a Mother just like yours.....and inspite of her and all the negative things she said.......I turned out to be a success...........to God anyway.......he's all that counts anyway!
I'm so glad you were able to get away from her........they are rottenness to the bones.....negative people are miserable, and they want to bring you down with them. Stay Postive, PS......you have great talent!
love and hugs
consue
lovingcritters that is

Re: this is my song to the world (User Rating: 1 )
by WereCat on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:43:51 PM AEST
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Sing it girl! I love it! It took me forever to find your talented purple @$$ on this site but I couldn’t resist sending you a comment. Love much!
-Cat

Re: this is my song to the world (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:57:17 PM AEST
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sweet:) hugs n' love nessa

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