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Array ( [sid] => 51442 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If Thou Shall Die Before Thee [time] => 2004-06-11 12:37:42 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If thou shall die before thee
To face the road alone
You'll always be beside me
In the wind I hear your moan

Everybreath the you have taken
Everything that you have eaten
Shall follow in my footsteps
As my heart remains A beatin

If thou shall die before thee
The path you made I follow
Everything that you have left for me
Shall always remain hollow

If you shall die before thee
And sleep the big long sleep
In the future I lay next to you
We both not make a peep
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 39 [informant] => deviled_brat_4_u [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

If Thou Shall Die Before Thee

Contributed by deviled_brat_4_u on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 12:37:42 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

If thou shall die before thee
To face the road alone
You'll always be beside me
In the wind I hear your moan

Everybreath the you have taken
Everything that you have eaten
Shall follow in my footsteps
As my heart remains A beatin

If thou shall die before thee
The path you made I follow
Everything that you have left for me
Shall always remain hollow

If you shall die before thee
And sleep the big long sleep
In the future I lay next to you
We both not make a peep

Copyright © deviled_brat_4_u ... [ 2004-06-11 12:37:42]
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Re: If Thou Shall Die Before Thee (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 12:40:13 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, great poem

pixie xx

Re: If Thou Shall Die Before Thee (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:21:26 PM AEST
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I liked the effort - but want to point out that Thou and Thee are the same thing.

Perhaps you could change the thee to me...

Re: If Thou Shall Die Before Thee (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:27:16 PM AEST
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I liked this and I think you have great potential.
There is a great idea behind this write. Keep writing my friend :o)

Larry

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