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Array ( [sid] => 51431 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If Love Made Sense [time] => 2004-06-11 11:02:50 [hometext] => Sometimes no amount of logic can explain something so basic to human life... This is my story here... and in the other poems i have posted Id love to hear your comments thanks Wayne [bodytext] => If love made sense
You’d fall in love with me
But if love made sense
I wouldn’t be in love with you
Because of all the pain
I daily go through
Can you see
Which one is worse
Living my life
Without you or a purpose
Or feeling like
I’m the center ring
In your circus
Your emotional plaything
To give your burdens
And cast your cares
Step back…
Enjoy
And watch me
Wallow in despair
You must be blind
Cause you know
That you know
But you can’t believe
What’d you see
If you opened your eyes
So you turn your back
And walk away
Hoping and pleading
That you’re wrong
About what you let go
Or are you keeping me around
Like a puppet on a string
Waiting for a better time
Cause you know
That for you
I’d do anything
But I cant see that far
Cause you took my sun
My moon and my stars
When you left
Now you hold my heart
And that’s all of me
So here I am… stuck
What do I do
Without me
Without you
I can’t explain
What I go through
Cause if love made sense
You’d fall in love with me
But if love made sense
I wouldn’t be in love with you
Cause this is just a glimpse
Of the pain I go through

© Wayne Wende
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 22 [informant] => swiftsouljah [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

If Love Made Sense

Contributed by swiftsouljah on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:02:50 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

If love made sense
You’d fall in love with me
But if love made sense
I wouldn’t be in love with you
Because of all the pain
I daily go through
Can you see
Which one is worse
Living my life
Without you or a purpose
Or feeling like
I’m the center ring
In your circus
Your emotional plaything
To give your burdens
And cast your cares
Step back…
Enjoy
And watch me
Wallow in despair
You must be blind
Cause you know
That you know
But you can’t believe
What’d you see
If you opened your eyes
So you turn your back
And walk away
Hoping and pleading
That you’re wrong
About what you let go
Or are you keeping me around
Like a puppet on a string
Waiting for a better time
Cause you know
That for you
I’d do anything
But I cant see that far
Cause you took my sun
My moon and my stars
When you left
Now you hold my heart
And that’s all of me
So here I am… stuck
What do I do
Without me
Without you
I can’t explain
What I go through
Cause if love made sense
You’d fall in love with me
But if love made sense
I wouldn’t be in love with you
Cause this is just a glimpse
Of the pain I go through

© Wayne Wende

Copyright Â© swiftsouljah ... [ 2004-06-11 11:02:50]
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Re: If Love Made Sense (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:07:07 AM AEST
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Wayne. this poem is so moving, beautifully written and very sad, well done, you have shared a trully great piece of writing with us all

takecare

Pixie xx

Re: If Love Made Sense (User Rating: 1 )
by Princesaazul16 on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:24:58 PM AEST
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Beautifully wrote! Keep up the good work. I loved it. It's so true. So deep. A lot of people understand how you feel, and you did a very good job putting it into words.
~Stace~

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