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Please show goofy the door

Lost souls mill about
As the ignorant run an shout

Look to the east
Beware of the beast

Societies doppelganger
Flees by in a blur

Music jams loud in the background
Another moment lost then found

Light a cig and relax
As you listen to the sax

Spinning lost ones
Looking for that special bone

In the depths
We share breaths

The sun rises bright
Your eyes a saving sight

And the world goes away
As we forget its stage play

STR 10-6-02
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insanity on the floor

Contributed by arakrune on Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 08:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Insanity on the floor
Please show goofy the door

Lost souls mill about
As the ignorant run an shout

Look to the east
Beware of the beast

Societies doppelganger
Flees by in a blur

Music jams loud in the background
Another moment lost then found

Light a cig and relax
As you listen to the sax

Spinning lost ones
Looking for that special bone

In the depths
We share breaths

The sun rises bright
Your eyes a saving sight

And the world goes away
As we forget its stage play

STR 10-6-02

Copyright © arakrune ... [ 2002-10-15 20:15:00]
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Re: insanity on the floor (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:24:13 AM AEST
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insanity on the floor you say... my word, that can mean a number of things!! this thing you wrote, it reads like the examination of small town. the whole walk through gives a barrage of images of where you are, but insanity on the floor?!? don't know what yur up to er thinking, but it seems odd in here. er maybe it's just one of those things incorporated into the smalltown everyday living list of events. yea, that sounds somewhat right... i hope so. kudos! ;0) -daniel

Re: insanity on the floor (User Rating: 1 )
by arakrune on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 10:35:25 AM AEST
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its about a moment in time and what is happening all around me at that moment as far a small town goes i live the los angeles orange county basin and i guess a coffee shop can resmble a small town

Re: insanity on the floor (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 05:56:44 AM AEST
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i think you have taken some thoughts... mixed then up in an insane/sane head and given us this poem that i think is quite good, not to mention entertaining... another great piece of prose...

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