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I cannot think
I cannot feel
I cannot breathe
I cannot see
Would anyone know if I ceased to be?

What if I can't outrun my fears
What if I scream and no one hears
What if I drown in my own tears
Would I really cease to be?

Cause i'm losing touch with reality
Forgetting practicality
I have two personalities
If one ceased to be
Would I still be me?

Maybe I don't want to be me
Maybe I wish I could just be free
I'll disappear into the sea
Or maybe I'll simply cease to be. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 48 [informant] => comfortablynumb [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Cease to Be

Contributed by comfortablynumb on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 10:53:33 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm losing sight of what is real
I cannot think
I cannot feel
I cannot breathe
I cannot see
Would anyone know if I ceased to be?

What if I can't outrun my fears
What if I scream and no one hears
What if I drown in my own tears
Would I really cease to be?

Cause i'm losing touch with reality
Forgetting practicality
I have two personalities
If one ceased to be
Would I still be me?

Maybe I don't want to be me
Maybe I wish I could just be free
I'll disappear into the sea
Or maybe I'll simply cease to be.

Copyright © comfortablynumb ... [ 2004-06-10 22:53:33]
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Re: Cease to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 02:47:18 AM AEST
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great write, I can relate. excellent choice for rhymes and good rhythm. A++++

Re: Cease to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:06:10 PM AEST
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very well written. The rhyming scheme is excellent.

Kimberly

Re: Cease to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:02:11 AM AEST
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amazing write. =]

Re: Cease to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by calebcrain on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 01:41:39 AM AEST
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i loved reading this poem it flows very well i especially liked the third stanza, it's an interesting thing to think about.

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