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You tell me a hundred times
I love you
But do you really mean it?
Do you say it cuz it’s true?
Are you telling me that
So you can use me
And say you have another friend
Do you really love me?
Or is our friendship just pretend?
When you are in a bad mood
I feel like an intruder
Anything I say is ignored
As if you don’t want me around
A useless sailor, thrown overboard
When I am with you with others
I feel like an accessory
Surrounded, yet so alone
The smile painted on my face
Is something I do not own
I don’t feel happy when I am with you
And when you call me anti-social
Yes, you are to blame
With your head in the sky,
And your excuses all the same
I’ve had enough
Of your magnified smiles
And your overflowing ego
I have forgiven you too many times,
Goodbye, before I go.
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Good-bye Before I Go

Contributed by Esther on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 09:52:16 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

When you’re in a good mood
You tell me a hundred times
I love you
But do you really mean it?
Do you say it cuz it’s true?
Are you telling me that
So you can use me
And say you have another friend
Do you really love me?
Or is our friendship just pretend?
When you are in a bad mood
I feel like an intruder
Anything I say is ignored
As if you don’t want me around
A useless sailor, thrown overboard
When I am with you with others
I feel like an accessory
Surrounded, yet so alone
The smile painted on my face
Is something I do not own
I don’t feel happy when I am with you
And when you call me anti-social
Yes, you are to blame
With your head in the sky,
And your excuses all the same
I’ve had enough
Of your magnified smiles
And your overflowing ego
I have forgiven you too many times,
Goodbye, before I go.

Copyright Â© Esther ... [ 2004-06-10 21:52:16]
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Re: Good-bye Before I Go (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:27:23 AM AEST
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Great poem, sorry that you feel like you have to say goodbye and things ,maybe hav'nt worked out how you would have wished for....

takecare
Pixie xx

Re: Good-bye Before I Go (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 12:53:04 AM AEST
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awesome

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