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Array ( [sid] => 51327 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 23:59 [time] => 2004-06-10 15:31:22 [hometext] => --all about the feeling of being too late to make amends although I guess by writing this it proves that it is not... enjoy-- [bodytext] => I’m sorry, a thousand times, sorry
Sorry for the way I’ve treated you
You’re my weeping willow today
When you should be my sunlight in rain
My smile, my eyes, and my love- I am in ore
All that I ever wanted in someone is you
And you are all that I have ignored
Sorry for calling you mate
When you’re always be so much more
[comments] => 9 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Overstated [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 26 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
23:59

Contributed by Overstated on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:31:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I’m sorry, a thousand times, sorry
Sorry for the way I’ve treated you
You’re my weeping willow today
When you should be my sunlight in rain
My smile, my eyes, and my love- I am in ore
All that I ever wanted in someone is you
And you are all that I have ignored
Sorry for calling you mate
When you’re always be so much more




Copyright © Overstated ... [ 2004-06-10 15:31:22]
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Re: 23:59 (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:44:39 PM AEST
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ahh my friend, to me it's never too late to make amends..but there are those that think an apology is worthless. I feel sorry for them for one day they will have to say " I am sorry " to someone too.

Very well done
Larry


Re: 23:59 (User Rating: 1 )
by AutomaticTLC on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 04:01:27 PM AEST
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eh..it was O.K. two stars man. Keep working at it.


Re: 23:59 (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:46:09 PM AEST
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This is a good poem some one gave it a rating of 2 but it is much better than that.
(You have one misspelled word on line 5 I believe you meant to write awe instead you wrote ore.) 4 stars for a very apt poem


Re: 23:59 (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 03:43:11 PM AEST
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we all make mistakes, no big deal. i thought this was amazing. a very well done poem.
i really enjoyed it.
cant wait to see more from you.
Arden


Re: 23:59 (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:40:49 AM AEST
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Well, it's not like any of us are really perfect in the first place, right? I loved this piece, keep it up.


Re: 23:59 (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:48:34 PM AEST
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I think that was amazing.


Re: 23:59 (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 02:24:10 PM AEST
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At least you realized your love for this person before it was too late.It's never too late to make amends,and sometimes we're just caught up in everything around us to realize what we do have.Hope all turned out well,
PumpkinPie


Re: 23:59 (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:49:43 AM AEST
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So have you shown her this? It does no good to make ammends if the person doesn't know it!!
Short and sweet, again. But I like that. Very succinct! Good write.
Thumps ; 0)


Re: 23:59 (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 11:30:03 AM AEST
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Everyone makes mistakes and we have to learn to either live with them or try and fix them to make the outcome to be better. This poem shows that you really are sorry. Great poem

christina




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