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What tomorrow will bring
She reflects on a time
Of not long ago
Of the night
She told him no
He took her selfworth
He blackened her soul instead
Now she's left
All screwed in the head
They all think she's in control
When she felt helpless
Thru it all
She tried to talk about it
No one wanted to listen
If they had taken the time
They could have heard
The cries
She holds them deep inside [comments] => 4 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 13 [informant] => bluedragonfly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

As She Sits And Wonders

Contributed by bluedragonfly on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:50:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

As she sits and wonders
What tomorrow will bring
She reflects on a time
Of not long ago
Of the night
She told him no
He took her selfworth
He blackened her soul instead
Now she's left
All screwed in the head
They all think she's in control
When she felt helpless
Thru it all
She tried to talk about it
No one wanted to listen
If they had taken the time
They could have heard
The cries
She holds them deep inside

Copyright © bluedragonfly ... [ 2004-06-10 14:50:00]
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Re: As She Sits And Wonders (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:55:20 PM AEST
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Beautifully written.

Re: As She Sits And Wonders (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:00:54 PM AEST
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awwww that was so sad...
Very well done
Roses
Larry

Re: As She Sits And Wonders (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:33:14 PM AEST
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ther5e are some strong feelings expressed - i think this is well written very story like narrative- good work!!

Re: As She Sits And Wonders (User Rating: 1 )
by Princesaazul16 on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 04:03:48 PM AEST
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Beautiful! I loved it! It's so deep and strong. Keep up the good work. I hope to hear more. Nice write!!
~Stace~

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