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Array ( [sid] => 51321 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hero-in-the-Making (song/poem??) [time] => 2004-06-10 14:39:03 [hometext] => ~All these days, I had been wondering whether she and I had lost one another... When in reality, at least one of the two, was searching for his own... [bodytext] => He often dreamt himself Prince Charming,
Or the hero to save the day,
But no matter the character, no matter the timing,
Or supernatural powers of resolve,
He still fell short, of nothing but himself.

For it remained irrelevent,
The heroic tales and stories he concoctured,
These adventures within his mind,

It made no difference,
As to which villain he'd slain,
Or of what sabrosa deeds he'd find,

For he was still fighting for his honor,
In the never-ending quest he sought,
True meaning, and point to his life.

But,
Lost within a labrinyth of grammatical complexities,
Captivated by a maze of wordy, expressionate tones,
Every wall constructed by daily anxieties,
He awoke every night, with adventures as his own.

A paladin by no means at all,
But this boy grew stronger, though shaken,
And with every wrong turn, dead-ended wall,
He became...
The hero in the making... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 21 [informant] => morelikelyrics [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Hero-in-the-Making (songpoem??)

Contributed by morelikelyrics on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:39:03 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

He often dreamt himself Prince Charming,
Or the hero to save the day,
But no matter the character, no matter the timing,
Or supernatural powers of resolve,
He still fell short, of nothing but himself.

For it remained irrelevent,
The heroic tales and stories he concoctured,
These adventures within his mind,

It made no difference,
As to which villain he'd slain,
Or of what sabrosa deeds he'd find,

For he was still fighting for his honor,
In the never-ending quest he sought,
True meaning, and point to his life.

But,
Lost within a labrinyth of grammatical complexities,
Captivated by a maze of wordy, expressionate tones,
Every wall constructed by daily anxieties,
He awoke every night, with adventures as his own.

A paladin by no means at all,
But this boy grew stronger, though shaken,
And with every wrong turn, dead-ended wall,
He became...
The hero in the making...

Copyright © morelikelyrics ... [ 2004-06-10 14:39:03]
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Re: Hero-in-the-Making (songpoem??) (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:55:24 PM AEST
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I like this! Very epic portrayal of life's climb to making something of yourself. Great work!
Andrew

Re: Hero-in-the-Making (songpoem??) (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:54:36 PM AEST
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This is good and I think I would like to hear it if it had music

Re: Hero-in-the-Making (songpoem??) (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 01:35:03 PM AEST
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i thought this was just awesome.
i really liked it alot.
very well written my friend.
write more soon.
Arden

Re: Hero-in-the-Making (songpoem??) (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:41:05 PM AEST
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Yes he did Lyrics. This was great! Well done. The ending was very unexpected but very very well written. Thank you for sharing.

Lindsey

PS. Works better as a poem.

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