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I’m finding it hard to breathe
I never meant for this to happen
I wish that you would leave

So can I just say a thousand thank yous?
I never met anyone like you before
I never meant to be this way
It’s just that I don’t want me anymore

You taught me how to breathe again
I never felt so alive
But I don’t know how to live
I don’t know what it is to cry

So here is where I say goodbye
I’m scared I’ll hurt you more
I never meant to be so afraid
I don’t know how to want me anymore

I don’t deserve the things you say
Or everything you do for me
But how can I show you love
When I don’t know how it is to be…

So here I am, I’m letting go
Stupidly of everything you helped me live through
I’m sorry, but I’ll never want you
Until I learn to want me too. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 52 [informant] => carmen_queasy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Until I want me too

Contributed by carmen_queasy on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 06:12:41 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I can’t concentrate
I’m finding it hard to breathe
I never meant for this to happen
I wish that you would leave

So can I just say a thousand thank yous?
I never met anyone like you before
I never meant to be this way
It’s just that I don’t want me anymore

You taught me how to breathe again
I never felt so alive
But I don’t know how to live
I don’t know what it is to cry

So here is where I say goodbye
I’m scared I’ll hurt you more
I never meant to be so afraid
I don’t know how to want me anymore

I don’t deserve the things you say
Or everything you do for me
But how can I show you love
When I don’t know how it is to be…

So here I am, I’m letting go
Stupidly of everything you helped me live through
I’m sorry, but I’ll never want you
Until I learn to want me too.

Copyright Â© carmen_queasy ... [ 2004-06-10 06:12:41]
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Re: Until I want me too (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 07:22:55 AM AEST
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so sad...don't let go...don't you see, you have a beautiful soul...

Re: Until I want me too (User Rating: 1 )
by RockNwhls on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 09:06:41 AM AEST
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wow.......wonderfully written, touched a cord.

Re: Until I want me too (User Rating: 1 )
by hannahbanana on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 09:19:31 AM AEST
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great poem

Re: Until I want me too (User Rating: 1 )
by AdamChantell on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 08:10:59 PM AEST
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once again... a another great write... i seem to relate to this one very well. starting to bring back some memories... hehe thanks for the inspiration

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