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Since before time
Or so it seems
Then something happend

I found a girl
You talked to her sister
Told me what i thought was a lie
I couldn't see why
Why you would do this
So i asked the girl
You almost got your *** kicked

Now our friendship isn't the same
I recently told you of my drinking problem
Without hesitation
You cussed me out
Told me i was wasting my life
Maybe your right
But can't you see
I drink because your out of my life

I want you back
My life is nothing without you
I need you to lean on
I need you to care about me
Most of all i need you to be with me
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Friends?

Contributed by rugby_player on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:03:01 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

We've been friends fo so long
Since before time
Or so it seems
Then something happend

I found a girl
You talked to her sister
Told me what i thought was a lie
I couldn't see why
Why you would do this
So i asked the girl
You almost got your *** kicked

Now our friendship isn't the same
I recently told you of my drinking problem
Without hesitation
You cussed me out
Told me i was wasting my life
Maybe your right
But can't you see
I drink because your out of my life

I want you back
My life is nothing without you
I need you to lean on
I need you to care about me
Most of all i need you to be with me

Copyright © rugby_player ... [ 2004-06-09 23:03:01]
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Re: Friends? (User Rating: 1 )
by HellsLibrarian on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:13:07 AM AEST
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I feel the same about my best friend. I hadn't seen her in more than a week until today, and I was so jonesin' for my fix. Just can't live without the delightful little minx.

Re: Friends? (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:53:01 PM AEST
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Listen, you don't need anyone to depend on, when you have yourself...I thought I need to deoend on my best friend an I thought I had to have her always around me, to keep mr from cutting...well she made me feel like ***** then turned on me alos...Im doing fine...I have my writing and thats all I really need...but I look at myself and all my scars and realize that I could have came upon my problems differently...you ust have to look for something...not someone to depend on...and if you need to talk to anyone Im here...you can always talk to me...but dont depend on me...lol just look at yourself...and think of all the good things you have going for you...your writing for instance..dig deeper into yourself and find something...you dont need her to depend on...great write...lots of feeling...it tells a story...awesome...
much love,
Dani

Re: Friends? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:08:59 AM AEST
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Sad but written well.
huggs,
emy

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