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Array ( [sid] => 51220 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Raped [time] => 2004-06-09 21:49:26 [hometext] => Please read my poem "Rape" if you have not done so already. It explains the situation better. [bodytext] => Lying in her dampening, cold, sweaty bed
She closed her eyes wishing she were dead.
She pressed tightly against the wall
Not being able to move at all.

Her hands clasped together tightly in fists
Looking out the window at the morning mist.
Sweat poured down her smooth face
As she strained her ears for his heavy pace.

Would he come back for me and do it again?
I thought for sure God would make this end.
What did I ever do to deserve something like this?
A child's life is suppose to be endless
bliss.

As her heart was rapidly pounding
Her breath was softly sounding.
She then closed her eyes once again.
Hoping this bad dream would finally end. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Seans_Girl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Raped

Contributed by Seans_Girl on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 09:49:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Lying in her dampening, cold, sweaty bed
She closed her eyes wishing she were dead.
She pressed tightly against the wall
Not being able to move at all.

Her hands clasped together tightly in fists
Looking out the window at the morning mist.
Sweat poured down her smooth face
As she strained her ears for his heavy pace.

Would he come back for me and do it again?
I thought for sure God would make this end.
What did I ever do to deserve something like this?
A child's life is suppose to be endless
bliss.

As her heart was rapidly pounding
Her breath was softly sounding.
She then closed her eyes once again.
Hoping this bad dream would finally end.

Copyright © Seans_Girl ... [ 2004-06-09 21:49:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Raped (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 09:54:07 PM AEST
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Very powerful poem. Great work.

Re: Raped (User Rating: 1 )
by nomie19877 on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:30:31 AM AEST
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wow great
looking forward 2 reading more of your stuff

Re: Raped (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:28:01 AM AEST
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REALLY HEART FELT! THE MAIN REASONS (so called) GUYS DO THIS IS B/C THEY HAVE LITTLE SELF CONFIDENCE-& MOST LIKELY SOMETHING ELSE!! IT'S A SHAME & THE BEST THING TO WISH FOR IS FOR GOD TO WATCH OVER YOU!!! ALSO JUST HOPE HE GOES TO PRISON & SOME GUY DOES THE SAME THING TO HIM!!!!

LOL~DAN!!!!!

Re: Raped (User Rating: 1 )
by diamond_tears on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 03:00:34 PM AEST
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well done. very brave of you to write . keep writing. pm me any time u need!! ive been thru similar

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