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Array ( [sid] => 51197 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~ Can't Anymore ~ [time] => 2004-06-09 18:25:21 [hometext] => Half inspired by the Eskimo Joe song From the Sea. [bodytext] =>

I’m so confused today
Feels like I’ve lost my way
I’m alone here in this sea
There is no land round me
And I need you
I can’t feel you
Anymore

I’ve got no words to say
Try to hold my tears at bay
Thought real hard and don’t know
Why it is you had to go
Trying to break free
Cause I can’t breathe
Anymore

Don’t look now my sky is gray
Want to stay in this bed all day
Broken pieces of my life collect
At my battered feet – I’ll leave it
And I want to see you
Cause I can’t see you
Anymore

My limbs are heaving like they are clay
Wish all these feelings would go away
I can remember every word we said
They’re all swimming round in my head
Inside I’m dying
And I’m not flying
Anymore

MW 09.06.4
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 48 [informant] => evilfairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

~ Can't Anymore ~

Contributed by evilfairy on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:25:21 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I’m so confused today
Feels like I’ve lost my way
I’m alone here in this sea
There is no land round me
And I need you
I can’t feel you
Anymore

I’ve got no words to say
Try to hold my tears at bay
Thought real hard and don’t know
Why it is you had to go
Trying to break free
Cause I can’t breathe
Anymore

Don’t look now my sky is gray
Want to stay in this bed all day
Broken pieces of my life collect
At my battered feet – I’ll leave it
And I want to see you
Cause I can’t see you
Anymore

My limbs are heaving like they are clay
Wish all these feelings would go away
I can remember every word we said
They’re all swimming round in my head
Inside I’m dying
And I’m not flying
Anymore

MW 09.06.4

Copyright Â© evilfairy ... [ 2004-06-09 18:25:21]
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Re: ~ Can't Anymore ~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:30:55 PM AEST
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I liked your format - sometimes I think the "ay" sound is over used, but you managed it nicely in arrangement.

Re: ~ Can't Anymore ~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:29:43 AM AEST
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Good work!
I enjoyed reading it.
Greetz,
Hur

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