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Array ( [sid] => 5119 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I were you [time] => 2002-10-15 12:30:00 [hometext] => This has always been a thought in my mind, and i hope you can all help me find out what to do. [bodytext] => I want to love him
But how can I
He only believes
That He is real
Not that He is the one true God
You know its not right
You know you cant love
So what do you do
Do you throw it away
Do you continue to love
And also to sin
Or do you say goodbye
And maybe never have this love again
You pray about it every night
But still no answer do you get
So all you can do is wonder
Cause the answer you dont have
So i ask this to all of you
What would you do
If I was you? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 11 [informant] => lolly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

If I were you

Contributed by lolly on Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

I want to love him
But how can I
He only believes
That He is real
Not that He is the one true God
You know its not right
You know you cant love
So what do you do
Do you throw it away
Do you continue to love
And also to sin
Or do you say goodbye
And maybe never have this love again
You pray about it every night
But still no answer do you get
So all you can do is wonder
Cause the answer you dont have
So i ask this to all of you
What would you do
If I was you?

Copyright © lolly ... [ 2002-10-15 12:30:00]
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Re: If I were you (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 01:49:26 PM AEST
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Great write! My advice to you even though I don't know you or him,but I've learned wasteing your time on a person is not the answer,try once,try twice, than move on, It might hurt now but looking back you'll be thankful you did.Good luck!

Re: If I were you (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 02:27:56 PM AEST
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hey~ I agree with the fore mentioned! God has something better than this for you. If you think that was great just imagine how good the real thing will be. Jer. 29:11 For I know the plans I have for you, plans to prosper you and not to harm you, plans to give you hope and a future! Hold on to that. Mr. Right is out there. You are still young and have plenty of time. Maybe you should let God love you like that for a while and fill that void then when you are ready He will bring around the perfect guy for you. be patient! It is a fruit of the spirit, you know you have, just use it. It is not wrong to feel what you are feeling, just place that in the truth of God's word and rely on that. Feelings can be misleading. Lean on the truth. It will all work out! I promise and so does God!
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