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Questionable
Contributed by
LiLTor878
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:12:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Which path do I take?
Do I walk through, or drown in the incoming wake?
Is it too late for me?
Is it too late to be set free?
Will I be trapped forever?
Or is there an escape lever?
If I died today,
Would you cry or say,
I'll worry about her another day?
Would you care?
Is anyone there?
Can anyone out there help me?
Help set me free,
From this misery,
The devil has created for me?
Copyright ©
LiLTor878
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2004-06-09 13:12:54]
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Re: Questionable
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:44:28 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, sorry that you are feeling like this, I can relate to how you're feeling as I imagine can alot of others on YPDC
Great job,
pixie xx |
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