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Array ( [sid] => 51125 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => NEED SOME PLACE TO LIVE [time] => 2004-06-09 12:14:32 [hometext] => A SAD ONE ! :-D ! [bodytext] => Hard, I find, it is to find
A private hiding corner to cry
This pinch I want away since birth
Is too much to even try

Sobbing silently and so careful
Not to let my pain out aloud
Can't cry musical rivers
Me helpless, lonely in this crowd

They tore apart the heartbroken
Hurt like always and again,
Always and again I thought I knew
But knew now the real pain

Pains now true, complains true too
Fate expects something else somehow
No tools I have to fight my doom
Am I afraid of death, still, now?

Im so mixed up and so scattered
I need no one to heed my call
So lonely me let me not break
No place I have for my pieces to fall.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 61 [informant] => frejya [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

NEED SOME PLACE TO LIVE

Contributed by frejya on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 12:14:32 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Hard, I find, it is to find
A private hiding corner to cry
This pinch I want away since birth
Is too much to even try

Sobbing silently and so careful
Not to let my pain out aloud
Can't cry musical rivers
Me helpless, lonely in this crowd

They tore apart the heartbroken
Hurt like always and again,
Always and again I thought I knew
But knew now the real pain

Pains now true, complains true too
Fate expects something else somehow
No tools I have to fight my doom
Am I afraid of death, still, now?

Im so mixed up and so scattered
I need no one to heed my call
So lonely me let me not break
No place I have for my pieces to fall.

Copyright © frejya ... [ 2004-06-09 12:14:32]
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Re: NEED SOME PLACE TO LIVE (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 12:18:15 PM AEST
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Awwww this is a sad one, but very well written

pixie xx

Re: NEED SOME PLACE TO LIVE (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 05:42:39 PM AEST
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TOUCH YOUR HEART & THAT'S WHERE THE LOVE WILL START! NOTHING ENDS WHEN YOU HAVE A FRIEND!! DESTINY IS A DARE W/O ANY TO SPARE!!! SO YOU DON'T HAVE TO CRY JUST GIVE IT A TRY!!!! YOU'VE GOT THE STRENGTH OF A 1,000 HEARTS TO LAST YOU ENDLESS LENGTHS!!!!! YOU CAN DO IT GIRL!!!!!! THE POEM WAS AWESOME,SAD BUT KICK ASS FREJYA!!!!!!!

LOL~DAN!!!!!!!!

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