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Array ( [sid] => 51124 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tainted Painting [time] => 2004-06-09 12:09:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The world is just a tainted painting,
With all the lost loves and the hurt escalating,
This is more than a work of art,
It befriends you at first then rips out your heart.

Our world is far from black and white,
It possess pain in the dark and the light,
The painting is as ugly as sin,
Where does it all end and where does it begin?

Life is a ***** and she’ll kick you in the teeth,
Never lets you see what really lurks beneath,
This place is just a twisted universe,
And all who exist here are blessed with a curse.

The answer to that question is yes,
The world can wear a masquerade dress,
Hide all it’s hate and disguise it so well,
This scary place has so many tales to tell.

You can’t hang this painting on your wall,
It will damage you and cause you to have a great fall,
Our planets axis is the artist’s easel,
With her brush she colours it with evil.
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Tainted Painting

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 12:09:45 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



The world is just a tainted painting,
With all the lost loves and the hurt escalating,
This is more than a work of art,
It befriends you at first then rips out your heart.

Our world is far from black and white,
It possess pain in the dark and the light,
The painting is as ugly as sin,
Where does it all end and where does it begin?

Life is a ***** and she’ll kick you in the teeth,
Never lets you see what really lurks beneath,
This place is just a twisted universe,
And all who exist here are blessed with a curse.

The answer to that question is yes,
The world can wear a masquerade dress,
Hide all it’s hate and disguise it so well,
This scary place has so many tales to tell.

You can’t hang this painting on your wall,
It will damage you and cause you to have a great fall,
Our planets axis is the artist’s easel,
With her brush she colours it with evil.




Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-06-09 12:09:45]
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Re: Tainted Painting (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 12:12:18 PM AEST
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This one is my favorite of yours so far. Nice job.


Re: Tainted Painting (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 12:48:52 PM AEST
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We live in a fallen and tainted world. You have described that well.
Stitch


Re: Tainted Painting (User Rating: 1 )
by Seans_Girl on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:14:56 PM AEST
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Very good! I liked it a lot. The world often seems like that a lot.


Re: Tainted Painting (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:22:36 PM AEST
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Ooooh wow, nice job! I enjoyed it a lot....Very nice write!

Blessings
Love, Jen


Re: Tainted Painting (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:56:55 PM AEST
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very well written!
The world is both a terrible and lovely place. Yes there is both good and evil.
Gives us poets something to write about. :)


Re: Tainted Painting (User Rating: 1 )
by frejya on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:52:28 AM AEST
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this one speaks a lot though

i wanna know wut u meant by this

"Our world is far from black and white,
It possess pain in the dark and the light"

reply k?
tc




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