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Array ( [sid] => 5112 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => don't miss it [time] => 2002-10-15 09:30:00 [hometext] => ok this one doesn't make any sense at all and dosn't ryme. but.......i write what i feel like writing so please don't judge it just because it doesn't ryme or anything. gotcha. [bodytext] => down in the ally's with gangs
smoking pot and drinking beer
with so many thoughts of wonder
when one of them pull out a gun
pulls the trigger and everything went down
goes and runs
with blood running down
with red he thinks its fun
so now it is black
and there are no take backs
so here i go as my shot
feet fear me not
this may be the only oppertunite that i've got
you better lose ur self in ur music the moment
you want it
you better never let it go
cause you only get one shot
do not miss your chance to blow
cause this oppertunity only comes once in a life time. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 13 [informant] => hot_topic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

don't miss it

Contributed by hot_topic on Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

down in the ally's with gangs
smoking pot and drinking beer
with so many thoughts of wonder
when one of them pull out a gun
pulls the trigger and everything went down
goes and runs
with blood running down
with red he thinks its fun
so now it is black
and there are no take backs
so here i go as my shot
feet fear me not
this may be the only oppertunite that i've got
you better lose ur self in ur music the moment
you want it
you better never let it go
cause you only get one shot
do not miss your chance to blow
cause this oppertunity only comes once in a life time.

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Re: don't miss it (User Rating: 1 )
by S_K_Williamson on Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 05:03:22 PM AEST
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It does make sense....to me at least.
I find it quite insightful.
Poetry does not have to rhyme...it has to say something. This says a lot.
Great write my friend,
haron;)

Re: don't miss it (User Rating: 1 )
by Killer on Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 10:30:42 AM AEST
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Indeed very interesting... good write.

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