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I don’t push you away
If anything I want you near
You tell me I have nothing…nothing at all to fear
What about losing you?
You’re the boy behind blue eyes
I wanna unmask the unveiling
I want to hear you say it
Not see it
“I love you”
It screams bloody murder
As if your pulling a knife out of your heart
Do you really think I hurt you?
Is this really real?
I hope it is because
I don’t wanna explain, that I feel
Come here…
It hurts, inside of me
Inside of me
I want you to know it
Step off your broken stool
Don’t hide your feelings inside of you
I don’t want to run, but stand still
This moment is it for real?
Don’t tell me you don’t care
I lied
Come here
Listen
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Behind Blue Eyes pt.2

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:41:36 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

"Behind Blue Eyes pt.2"

I don’t push you away
If anything I want you near
You tell me I have nothing…nothing at all to fear
What about losing you?
You’re the boy behind blue eyes
I wanna unmask the unveiling
I want to hear you say it
Not see it
“I love you”
It screams bloody murder
As if your pulling a knife out of your heart
Do you really think I hurt you?
Is this really real?
I hope it is because
I don’t wanna explain, that I feel
Come here…
It hurts, inside of me
Inside of me
I want you to know it
Step off your broken stool
Don’t hide your feelings inside of you
I don’t want to run, but stand still
This moment is it for real?
Don’t tell me you don’t care
I lied
Come here
Listen

Copyright Â© Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-06-09 03:41:36]
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Re: Behind Blue Eyes pt.2 (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 04:24:16 AM AEST
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I have seen the first part also... powerful and .emotional write..Good Keep it up.
venkat

Re: Behind Blue Eyes pt.2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 01:34:29 PM AEST
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I read the first part but didnt bother commenting because I knew I would have to finish it. I enjoyed this poem a lot your feelings were expressed very well, everything fitted pretty nicely too.

Kisses,
~Soulless~

Re: Behind Blue Eyes pt.2 (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 08:51:03 PM AEST
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Good job girl. Hmmmm it seems to me i have told you are are good at this but do you ever listen to me...i might as well give up..oh well anywho great job

Re: Behind Blue Eyes pt.2 (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 08:14:15 PM AEST
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very nice, came together well, and I agree with rugby, you are a great poet! If you dont see it, we do. A++++

Re: Behind Blue Eyes pt.2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 09:40:48 PM AEST
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Good

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