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Ensemble of paragon she'd pretend to be
Locked in her minted room of make believe
Voiced in the avenue of being naive

Everyone adored her in her illusion
Tranquillity of grandeur delusion
Rained out by reality's brass intrusion
Amuses herself in her seclusion

Invocation of glamour and champagne
Needy contradiction, self-conscious but vain
Drunk off the severity of her disdain
Ruined the serenity of her domain

Off to the past to rediscover who she was
Past the point where all she craves is applause
Satisfaction found in embracing the flaws
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Velveteen Princess

Contributed by brigitte7735 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:25:27 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Velveteen princess in a castle by the sea
Ensemble of paragon she'd pretend to be
Locked in her minted room of make believe
Voiced in the avenue of being naive

Everyone adored her in her illusion
Tranquillity of grandeur delusion
Rained out by reality's brass intrusion
Amuses herself in her seclusion

Invocation of glamour and champagne
Needy contradiction, self-conscious but vain
Drunk off the severity of her disdain
Ruined the serenity of her domain

Off to the past to rediscover who she was
Past the point where all she craves is applause
Satisfaction found in embracing the flaws

Copyright © brigitte7735 ... [ 2004-06-08 21:25:27]
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Re: Velveteen Princess (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 01:42:47 AM AEST
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B e a u t i f u l, Vanessa!

Lindsey

Re: Velveteen Princess (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:48:12 PM AEST
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B, E, A, utiful i believe if i live in a film and played god for the day that would have been what i would have said

I love the feel this poem give off its almost gentle with a carressive feel locked deep within the lines, and yet it hold a stain of fear within also, fear of not being accepted fear of being different

Im probably totally wrong, but they say poetry is what you perseve it to be so, in which case i can actually never be wrong lol

Luke

Re: Velveteen Princess (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:30:33 PM AEST
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fantastic write. =]

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