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They keep falling until I fear
That I will drown in my tears
I miss you so much
And I long for your touch
For you to hold me in your arms
You said to others
I was only a friend
But I loved you
From the moment I met you
You and I became best friends
But I could not change my feelings
Others told you how I felt
But nothing changed
I tried dating different people
But my love was with you
Then one day without a day's notice
You said you were moving
That day you started packing
And moving to your new home
I haven't seen you much since
But know this
The secret I hold within
Is the love I hold for you

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The Secret I Hold Within

Contributed by linagalMBfan01 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:16:08 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Raindrops fall from my eyes
They keep falling until I fear
That I will drown in my tears
I miss you so much
And I long for your touch
For you to hold me in your arms
You said to others
I was only a friend
But I loved you
From the moment I met you
You and I became best friends
But I could not change my feelings
Others told you how I felt
But nothing changed
I tried dating different people
But my love was with you
Then one day without a day's notice
You said you were moving
That day you started packing
And moving to your new home
I haven't seen you much since
But know this
The secret I hold within
Is the love I hold for you

Copyright © linagalMBfan01 ... [ 2004-06-08 20:16:08]
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Re: The Secret I Hold Within (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:20:40 PM AEST
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that is simply marvelous, and beautiful (but how tragic! i feel sincere in saying that i really feel for you. it is real heartbreaking to hear of your loss for your love, truly sad. just hang in there and maybe one day believe it or not, your love may return, almost like a lost pet you did not think would ever return, but a good pet always does.

brandon

Re: The Secret I Hold Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:16:28 AM AEST
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Beautiful but sad. Don't give up hoping while there is true love in your heart! Hope will not disappoint us.
Blessings
Andrew

Re: The Secret I Hold Within (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 04:02:49 AM AEST
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This was really good, sweetie. I'm glad to see you finally post something. :O) And he didn't move as far away as we first thought, so it's always a possibility that, maybe, in the future........WHAT!?! It can happen!?! Hope you post more. Love You.
Gramma Thumps ; 0 )

Re: The Secret I Hold Within (User Rating: 1 )
by moon_light on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 06:25:25 PM AEST
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hart
remeber lina i know how it feals. im here. i felt the same whay with dragon

moonlight

Re: The Secret I Hold Within (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:52:25 PM AEST
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Fisrt off.... welcome to YPDC and second... great write... I've been there and done that so I know exactly how it feels...
~Donna~

Re: The Secret I Hold Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:44:08 PM AEST
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This is a very heart felt poem. I know how it feels when people move away. Thanks for sharing

Re: The Secret I Hold Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Kittenfantastico on Saturday, 23rd October 2004 @ 07:27:47 PM AEST
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So heart felt, I used to feel like that about someone) once opon a time too.

Re: The Secret I Hold Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Grl on Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 10:39:09 AM AEST
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This is a good poem, I think I know whos it about, but atleast he didnt move far far away. You know I am always here for ya grl.

Baby_Grl

Re: The Secret I Hold Within (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 10:24:41 PM AEST
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good write i like it its very moving even for a hellsspawn like me well ttyl bye

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