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My So-Called Life
Contributed by
AnaBanana
on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:07:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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This day feels empty like a hollow tree.
There are no feelings inside of me.
I breathe in and I breathe out,
My reason for being I seem to doubt.
I start to question why I'm here.
My happiness slowly disappears.
I don't know what I'm living for.
I don't want to be here anymore.
I want to believe that I'll be fine
and get my freak-life back in line,
but if in life I don't succeed,
remember who I used to be.
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AnaBanana
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2004-06-08 20:07:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My So-Called Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by apollo on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:14:09 PM AEST (User
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im glad you said you were not suicidal before posting this, because otherwise i would think otherwise. this is a very deep and vivid poem with very captivating emotions portrayed. i really like this, looking forward to more.
brandon |
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Re: My So-Called Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by MDodgen on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:18:24 AM AEST (User
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wonderful images again, and i like this style. very simple and straight forward. good job. |
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