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Twitchy today
I shiver and quake inside.
Somehow I Need some thing
I seem to feel out of Touch
Some one needs to
Get Me Back Down

Help, I whisper,
To no one here .
I can feel myself -
fall crashing this final Time.
Its not my heart
its just the stress.
I tell myself
I need to just
Call Out.

Strange But I Can"t

Trying to hold on
and steady myself,
and its getting fuzzy.
Is some one out there?
Lisen, I am Alone
I swore I heard a knock.

Looking down I've wet myself
Lying semi concieous on the ground
No I lied I am still alone
Help ,
I Sqeak ,
I am Getting weak .
Dear God
Is Some one out there?
NO one

OK so now its growing Dark
and the Cold is setting in.
Perhap I'II just drift away
Sleep sounds good some way.
Eyes grow so heavy
my breath drew slow.
I Can"t take it any more.

Take me now While I am Alone .

Not in Front of Any One

Whisper
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While I am Alone

Contributed by Whisper on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:04:04 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Feeling kinda Jumpy
Twitchy today
I shiver and quake inside.
Somehow I Need some thing
I seem to feel out of Touch
Some one needs to
Get Me Back Down

Help, I whisper,
To no one here .
I can feel myself -
fall crashing this final Time.
Its not my heart
its just the stress.
I tell myself
I need to just
Call Out.

Strange But I Can"t

Trying to hold on
and steady myself,
and its getting fuzzy.
Is some one out there?
Lisen, I am Alone
I swore I heard a knock.

Looking down I've wet myself
Lying semi concieous on the ground
No I lied I am still alone
Help ,
I Sqeak ,
I am Getting weak .
Dear God
Is Some one out there?
NO one

OK so now its growing Dark
and the Cold is setting in.
Perhap I'II just drift away
Sleep sounds good some way.
Eyes grow so heavy
my breath drew slow.
I Can"t take it any more.

Take me now While I am Alone .

Not in Front of Any One

Whisper

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Re: While I am Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:16:50 PM AEST
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how sad. and appealing i must say, i am in this current mindset in my life at the moment as well. the only thing i can say is to hang in there, no matter how hard life gets, just remember those that are with you, not those that are not. you sound like a good person, and without you there would be one less good person in this world and we do not want that.

brandon

Re: While I am Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:05:10 PM AEST
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Whisper,
you are never alone, no matter how it feels. God is always by your side and those whose lives you haved touched are continually watching over you. very well written work.

the voice

Re: While I am Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:04:06 PM AEST
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Well. personally, I hope he leaves you here with us for a long time. He is always with you, my dear, you are never alone. God and my friends are what just got me through a bad time, and we will strive to do the same for you if you need it. Just call on us.

Hugs,
Rita

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