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Array ( [sid] => 51017 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unheard, Inaudible [time] => 2004-06-08 18:12:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => burn her flesh with gasoline
break oaken shaft accross her spine

(perfect picture of beauty cannot live
cannot live by my soul)

i am so ugly
i am so ugly

i am...
so dark, in shadow, shudder
so black cloak
swirling round
so eyes of murky luminescence
glisten red

(translate into evil)

...talon side her slender neck...
(naked as she burns
as she bleeds
dripping down
over nipples,
over breasts)

tender rounded

red
so suggestive
disallowed,
(censor me, no silence)

...

So of legs
of thighs of heat
of wet and clear desire...
Take me to my blade of silver,
plunge so deep into her
sultry body; quivering...

(of gasp,
of breath,
of shallow words)

You see I cannot live
cannot live by my soul...

(now love and sex
is under me
and sweat so far beneath)

in chill and dark of dungeon,
slime and stone
...of echoed cries...
(We rape
and we fair,)

you are and she is
Unheard, Inaudible.

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Unheard, Inaudible

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 06:12:30 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

burn her flesh with gasoline
break oaken shaft accross her spine

(perfect picture of beauty cannot live
cannot live by my soul)

i am so ugly
i am so ugly

i am...
so dark, in shadow, shudder
so black cloak
swirling round
so eyes of murky luminescence
glisten red

(translate into evil)

...talon side her slender neck...
(naked as she burns
as she bleeds
dripping down
over nipples,
over breasts)

tender rounded

red
so suggestive
disallowed,
(censor me, no silence)

...

So of legs
of thighs of heat
of wet and clear desire...
Take me to my blade of silver,
plunge so deep into her
sultry body; quivering...

(of gasp,
of breath,
of shallow words)

You see I cannot live
cannot live by my soul...

(now love and sex
is under me
and sweat so far beneath)

in chill and dark of dungeon,
slime and stone
...of echoed cries...
(We rape
and we fair,)

you are and she is
Unheard, Inaudible.

Copyright © SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2004-06-08 18:12:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unheard, Inaudible (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:41:58 PM AEST
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wow I can't believe this wasn't banned also equally unbelievable is the fact that no one commented on it either in praise or in 'justifiable' anger as they spewed their beliefs all over the collective masses like a drunk spews all over the sidewalk. Anyway I must say I enjoyed this poem. I also enjoyed the image of her burning although I don't think that was meant to be taken literally. Once again a good poem with your trademark stamped across it like a psychotic rhino tramples forests indiscriminately with images of joy running through its peanut sized brain. Anyway I'll shut up now and traipse along to read your other poems.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Unheard, Inaudible (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 05:19:53 AM AEST
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This is fantastic, it set an image in my mind, a seductive yet dark evil setting, its hard to explain but it all seemed very 'saucy' lol, x

Re: Unheard, Inaudible (User Rating: 1 )
by bj111 on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 10:15:16 AM AEST
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Great opening lines. Really very good. Captured me immediately and forced me to read on. That is a good quality in any poem.

I realize this is confessional and hope ur alright. Hang in. Please keep writing...bob

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