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living, loving, leaving.
Her sweat is a vapored elixir,
chemical love, sweet scent of her hair.
I cannot be without her,
without her eyes and her smile.
The way she looks in a towel after a hot shower,
or how it feels to hold her while she sleeps. She is the reason for life, she is my love. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 2 [informant] => deadreckoning1983 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Chemical Love

Contributed by deadreckoning1983 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:48:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Never in a dream she comes,
living, loving, leaving.
Her sweat is a vapored elixir,
chemical love, sweet scent of her hair.
I cannot be without her,
without her eyes and her smile.
The way she looks in a towel after a hot shower,
or how it feels to hold her while she sleeps. She is the reason for life, she is my love.

Copyright © deadreckoning1983 ... [ 2004-06-08 17:48:54]
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Re: Chemical Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:39:02 PM AEST
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Some one gave you 3 stars on this poem. I think they were abit critical.

I watch a lot of movies and this poem reminds me of- (I hope this doesn't anger you) Golem's speech in the cave in the movie "The followship of the ring"

"It came to me, my love, my love my precious"

You are a very good writer and this poem brings back many movie memories. I look forward to reading more.

Your love is true for your companion that adds to the value of this poem greatly 5 stars

Re: Chemical Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Ethereal_Engine on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 09:44:36 AM AEST
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The line that caught my attention is "her sweat is a vapored elixir" What a great image of a woman shrouded in mist that heals all troubles completley like using an elixir of health in Final Fantasy lol. Very imaginative love poem. Nice job.

Re: Chemical Love (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 05:02:48 PM AEST
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You always use great words, and I like your experimentation. Anyone who likes a poem of yours should check out the rest. --Mothy

Re: Chemical Love (User Rating: 1 )
by cuddlytiger17 on Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 04:35:12 PM AEST
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This is very touching and sweet. I like the images and descriptions of her, and the alliteration in the 2nd line is great. You seem like a real romantic. hehe. :)

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