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Array ( [sid] => 51007 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So Sad To Say [time] => 2004-06-08 17:42:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => this poem is dedicated to the american soldiers
who harrased the iraqi prisoners by mistreating
them badly and making them do very cruel things,
if u hav seen the news u kno wut they've done,
since they did tht some ppl in iraq got an
american (not even a soldier) and sliced his head
off and recorded it..the kid was juss a teen like
u and me,God Bless him, leave feedbak if u`d like,
id appreciate it.



laughs of hatred echo thru the walls
smiles of evil given to them all
a crazii illusion
a shocking crime
startled confusion
a waste of time
the cruelty u hav done
will haunt u till u die
if u could answer this
question, why o why?!
dont u see the consequenses
written on the wall?
dont u kno for ur mistake
another man must fall??
ur selfishness will taunt u
with every word u speak
didnt u kno they'd get revenge??
ur knowledge is so weak!
tramatizing innocent eyes
as a waterfall of tears
become alive
for this u will pay
im sure
the price will be hihg
as high as high can go
so now ur world is crashing down
so sad to say u deserve it
upon ur face a permenant frown
God plz forgive them
if they kno they've done wrong
God plz forgive thier sins,
if they are truely sorry with all thier heart
althouhg they knew wut they were doin all along
now punishment will invade
and last until u die
if only u werent so selfish or cruel
one more person would be alive...
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So Sad To Say

Contributed by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:42:40 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



this poem is dedicated to the american soldiers
who harrased the iraqi prisoners by mistreating
them badly and making them do very cruel things,
if u hav seen the news u kno wut they've done,
since they did tht some ppl in iraq got an
american (not even a soldier) and sliced his head
off and recorded it..the kid was juss a teen like
u and me,God Bless him, leave feedbak if u`d like,
id appreciate it.



laughs of hatred echo thru the walls
smiles of evil given to them all
a crazii illusion
a shocking crime
startled confusion
a waste of time
the cruelty u hav done
will haunt u till u die
if u could answer this
question, why o why?!
dont u see the consequenses
written on the wall?
dont u kno for ur mistake
another man must fall??
ur selfishness will taunt u
with every word u speak
didnt u kno they'd get revenge??
ur knowledge is so weak!
tramatizing innocent eyes
as a waterfall of tears
become alive
for this u will pay
im sure
the price will be hihg
as high as high can go
so now ur world is crashing down
so sad to say u deserve it
upon ur face a permenant frown
God plz forgive them
if they kno they've done wrong
God plz forgive thier sins,
if they are truely sorry with all thier heart
althouhg they knew wut they were doin all along
now punishment will invade
and last until u die
if only u werent so selfish or cruel
one more person would be alive...




Copyright © xxbreathlessx ... [ 2004-06-08 17:42:40]
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Re: So Sad To Say (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:52:09 PM AEST
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you must not have heard, those pics were fake. even if they weren't did you forget how incent reporters have been beheaded on camera for their families to see. the treatment of the iraquis was cake compared to what our prisoners have to suffer with.


Re: So Sad To Say (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 05:57:47 PM AEST
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i didnt know it was fake, i neevr heard..i would delete it but i dunno how...


Re: So Sad To Say (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 09:53:55 AM AEST
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The idea that anyone suffers such base cruelty is a disgrace.
Nice job tackling this tough subject




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