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Its like a battle in my heart
Do i keep on living
Or just let it consume me
It would be easy to give up
Sometimes i think it would be better
But i know there has to be someone
Someone there that cares
Cares enough to miss me if i were to let it consume me

If i were to die
I don't think even i
Would show up at my funeral
I've made my enemies
But none worse the me
Life has beaten me up
And now my heart has taken what is rest of the remains
I will soon me another statistic
Its hard for me to say good bye
But sometimes goodbye is the way
The way to happiness
The way to peace

It is with this that i say goodbye to myself
I will not miss myself for i know i did the right thing
So goodbye me
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Me Vs. Myself

Contributed by rugby_player on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 03:51:18 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Everyday i wake up
Its like a battle in my heart
Do i keep on living
Or just let it consume me
It would be easy to give up
Sometimes i think it would be better
But i know there has to be someone
Someone there that cares
Cares enough to miss me if i were to let it consume me

If i were to die
I don't think even i
Would show up at my funeral
I've made my enemies
But none worse the me
Life has beaten me up
And now my heart has taken what is rest of the remains
I will soon me another statistic
Its hard for me to say good bye
But sometimes goodbye is the way
The way to happiness
The way to peace

It is with this that i say goodbye to myself
I will not miss myself for i know i did the right thing
So goodbye me

Copyright © rugby_player ... [ 2004-06-08 15:51:18]
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Re: Me Vs. Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 03:58:53 PM AEST
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you need to stop bringing yourself down....you are a great writer...you put so much feeling and so many thougts and emotions it was a great write I enjoyed reading it...you have all the writing tools, and abilities to make something of yourself...my poeetry is cliche and original. yours has a lot of feeling in it...keep it up...
much love,
Dani

Re: Me Vs. Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 04:46:22 PM AEST
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Great poem, I have read a couple of yours before this one and I have to say I am still impresed.

pixie xx

Re: Me Vs. Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:01:27 AM AEST
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I hear ya, I can relate.
veery good writing!
huggs,
emy

Re: Me Vs. Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Justalady on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 03:38:42 PM AEST
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Strong words, stronger yet the emotion behind the words. Giving up on one's self is the most destructive thing one can do. I've been to the bottom but the will to survive always puts the tiny spark needed to go on. I truly hope that spark is there for you. June

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