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My Ocean
Contributed by
comfortablynumb
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Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 03:19:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Let the air flow freely in
Let me have one deep, satisfying breath
A light breeze over the dark grey ocean that is my heart,
Too cloudy for anyone to see what's beneath the surface.
When I let others enter, they drown in the depths
I don't want them to suffocate
So I'll stay alone
Bobbing with my head above water
After all I'm used to struggling for air here
In my ocean.
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2004-06-08 15:19:22]
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Re: My Ocean
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 06:52:40 PM AEST
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