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Array ( [sid] => 50946 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Always A Mile Away... [time] => 2004-06-08 10:35:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I fell in love,
Through an IM,
I fell in love,
Through a dim,
Expression.

Thought it couldn't be done,
Thought it couldn't even be fun,
Through it wouldn't,
Ever happen to me.

But as time went on,
For many many years,
The 'connection' just grew,
I lost track,
On what I was supposed to even do.

But as you admitted,
And I admitted too,
Pain was the after math,
And tears followed too.

But as my senses came to me,
I finally noticed,
The distance between us,
Could never be filled.

I'll always be a mile away,
A faint voice in the air,
A needle in a hay stack,
Not making it's way.

Never there to appear,
At your door step in the rain,
Never to reach over,
A shove a pillow in your face,
Never to comfort,
The pain..

Because,
I'll always be,
A mile away...

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 280 [topic] => 20 [informant] => SheDevil13317 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InternetLove )

Always A Mile Away...

Contributed by SheDevil13317 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:35:11 AM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove

I fell in love,
Through an IM,
I fell in love,
Through a dim,
Expression.

Thought it couldn't be done,
Thought it couldn't even be fun,
Through it wouldn't,
Ever happen to me.

But as time went on,
For many many years,
The 'connection' just grew,
I lost track,
On what I was supposed to even do.

But as you admitted,
And I admitted too,
Pain was the after math,
And tears followed too.

But as my senses came to me,
I finally noticed,
The distance between us,
Could never be filled.

I'll always be a mile away,
A faint voice in the air,
A needle in a hay stack,
Not making it's way.

Never there to appear,
At your door step in the rain,
Never to reach over,
A shove a pillow in your face,
Never to comfort,
The pain..

Because,
I'll always be,
A mile away...

Copyright © SheDevil13317 ... [ 2004-06-08 10:35:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Always A Mile Away... (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:00:45 AM AEST
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beautiful write... a "mile" isn't that far when you really think about it... love conquers all.

Re: Always A Mile Away... (User Rating: 1 )
by SheDevil13317 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:06:01 AM AEST
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^_^ thnx, but what I meant by a "mile" was to enroll a farther distance, actually, the person who I was writing about lives in Oregon and I live in Ohio, in the unite states/ :)

Re: Always A Mile Away... (User Rating: 1 )
by LiLTor878 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:07:31 AM AEST
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I love your poem! It tells a heartfelt story that I think will touch everyone!

Re: Always A Mile Away... (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:50:00 AM AEST
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I figured that! ;)

Re: Always A Mile Away... (User Rating: 1 )
by Twisterchaser on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:51:45 AM AEST
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been there done that a mile is a life time away.. a heart felt write.

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