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Array ( [sid] => 50862 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Should I Pull Myself Together? [time] => 2004-06-07 19:43:00 [hometext] => Diana, in a moment of lost hopes and dreams, I had these thoughts. I would never, because of you and my daughter, but I love you so much. I just want us. I need you again, forever this time. [bodytext] => Sometimes I think I’m crazy
Mixed thoughts within my head
Should I Pull Myself Together?
Or pull the trigger instead?

And I wonder why I feel this
It seems that I’ve been cursed
To have to feel too much
As common sense and guilt conversed.

I just can’t stop my emotion
It’s so deep inside my heart
So Should I Pull Myself Together
Before she pulls me apart?

I don’t know how to fake this
Why must I be this way?
A man should not get this lost
In tears, with so much to say.

I have to ask this question
Before I send my goodbyes
Should I Pull Myself Together?
Or pull the hammer, and close my eyes?

I don’t think that this is normal
And I know this can’t be me
I have never been this fragile
And broken down so easily.

So I must find my reasons
To make these thoughts fade away
So Should I Pull Myself Together?
For you, I’ve pulled together, today. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 63 [informant] => Joker17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )

Should I Pull Myself Together?

Contributed by Joker17 on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:43:00 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

Sometimes I think I’m crazy
Mixed thoughts within my head
Should I Pull Myself Together?
Or pull the trigger instead?

And I wonder why I feel this
It seems that I’ve been cursed
To have to feel too much
As common sense and guilt conversed.

I just can’t stop my emotion
It’s so deep inside my heart
So Should I Pull Myself Together
Before she pulls me apart?

I don’t know how to fake this
Why must I be this way?
A man should not get this lost
In tears, with so much to say.

I have to ask this question
Before I send my goodbyes
Should I Pull Myself Together?
Or pull the hammer, and close my eyes?

I don’t think that this is normal
And I know this can’t be me
I have never been this fragile
And broken down so easily.

So I must find my reasons
To make these thoughts fade away
So Should I Pull Myself Together?
For you, I’ve pulled together, today.

Copyright © Joker17 ... [ 2004-06-07 19:43:00]
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Re: Should I Pull Myself Together? (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:58:36 PM AEST
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A beautiful highly emotional poem. In the first stanza you asked two questions should u die or should u pull yourself together. I think u should take the harder of those two choices and continue on it would be better for all the parties involved.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Should I Pull Myself Together? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 09:31:01 PM AEST
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amazing write. the emotional outpour in this is evident.

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