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Array ( [sid] => 50855 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Our Flame [time] => 2004-06-07 19:09:12 [hometext] => About a love that is but can never be... [bodytext] =>

I feel frozen in time.
It’s been so long now
Since I last called you mine
And now I’m lost in this space

This space that was then
And it was all so very good
But now I can’t recall when
I lost you and left you behind

You called me that day
And I was as excited as you
Because I thought we’d found our way
Back together - finally again

But your path has diverted
And been joined by hers
Now my path is deserted
And I’m left waiting for you

You tell me nothing’s changed
And I believe you, I do
But I must be deranged
Because we’re both wrong

We’re wrong to believe
That what was, can still be
There’s no way we can weave
Our lives together again

It doesn’t seem right
To walk away now
I feel I must fight
For everything that’s there

There’s a bright burning flame
That will never blow out
And there’s no-one to blame
For what should have been

MW 07.06.04 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 2 [informant] => evilfairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Our Flame

Contributed by evilfairy on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:09:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I feel frozen in time.
It’s been so long now
Since I last called you mine
And now I’m lost in this space

This space that was then
And it was all so very good
But now I can’t recall when
I lost you and left you behind

You called me that day
And I was as excited as you
Because I thought we’d found our way
Back together - finally again

But your path has diverted
And been joined by hers
Now my path is deserted
And I’m left waiting for you

You tell me nothing’s changed
And I believe you, I do
But I must be deranged
Because we’re both wrong

We’re wrong to believe
That what was, can still be
There’s no way we can weave
Our lives together again

It doesn’t seem right
To walk away now
I feel I must fight
For everything that’s there

There’s a bright burning flame
That will never blow out
And there’s no-one to blame
For what should have been

MW 07.06.04

Copyright Â© evilfairy ... [ 2004-06-07 19:09:12]
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Re: Our Flame (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:20:26 PM AEST
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a sad story, but told beautifully. interesting rhyme pattern... great write

Re: Our Flame (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 07:26:59 PM AEST
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Nice write I know how you feel. Good choice of words it really puts the feelings on the page.

Whisper

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