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Originally wrote October 10,2001
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How Long?

Contributed by Tori on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 06:13:31 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

How Long can we go on? How long will this go on,to open our eyes and see it's all gone. Some of us aren't ready to move on, we just dwell on what's wrong and what's going down and are to undone to undo what's been done, to blind to open our eyes and change the wrong to right to make our life better. We just go on as if it doesn't exist. If we go on and don't change this mess this won't exist neither will we. I'd rather go on when it's time for him to judge that it's my time, rather than to let ignorance and stress take me out first, but when it's our time to go we'll go, you'll never know that's why we need to change this for the best of us to live together in peace.

Originally wrote October 10,2001
Tori

Copyright © Tori ... [ 2004-06-07 18:13:31]
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Re: How Long? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:03:15 PM AEST
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well done , enjoyed this alot.

Re: How Long? (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:28:32 PM AEST
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very unique style... and very beautiful. great message!

Re: How Long? (User Rating: 1 )
by Tinkkerbelle on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 07:36:33 PM AEST
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I agree with you, Tori.

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