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Array ( [sid] => 50825 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You're Better Off..... [time] => 2004-06-07 12:02:04 [hometext] => Another poem which I wrote today, I was feeling worthless and wallowing in some self pity....comments appreciated. [bodytext] => Without me as I cause nothing but hurt and pain,
From saying hurtful things and being a ***** I can’t always refrain,
If I wasn’t alive I couldn’t cause you this unnecessary hurt,
I deserve to be thrown away into the dirt.

You deserve much better than what you have in me,
I am just no good why do you fail to see?
If I wasn’t around your life would be so great,
Instead you have a girlfriend who is consumed by hate.

I am worthless, the lowest of the low,
But why do you care and love me so?
I am a walking work of art gone wrong,
Someone who everywhere she goes brings her depression along.

Before I came along everything was fine,
You heard about my troubled past through the grape vine,
You didn’t listen then ,but I bet you wish you did now,
The person you call your princess is nothing more than a sadistic cow.

My life has always been full of ups and downs,
Your life has took a turn for the worst since I’ve been around,
I love you to bits, from the bottom of my heart,
I don’t want to hurt you but I also don’t want us to ever part.
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You're Better Off.....

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 12:02:04 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Without me as I cause nothing but hurt and pain,
From saying hurtful things and being a ***** I can’t always refrain,
If I wasn’t alive I couldn’t cause you this unnecessary hurt,
I deserve to be thrown away into the dirt.

You deserve much better than what you have in me,
I am just no good why do you fail to see?
If I wasn’t around your life would be so great,
Instead you have a girlfriend who is consumed by hate.

I am worthless, the lowest of the low,
But why do you care and love me so?
I am a walking work of art gone wrong,
Someone who everywhere she goes brings her depression along.

Before I came along everything was fine,
You heard about my troubled past through the grape vine,
You didn’t listen then ,but I bet you wish you did now,
The person you call your princess is nothing more than a sadistic cow.

My life has always been full of ups and downs,
Your life has took a turn for the worst since I’ve been around,
I love you to bits, from the bottom of my heart,
I don’t want to hurt you but I also don’t want us to ever part.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-06-07 12:02:04]
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Re: You're Better Off..... (User Rating: 1 )
by oldernotwiser on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 01:11:12 PM AEST
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Sometimes it's hard not to lose your SELF when you've lost someone else. Hope you'll hang in there.

Re: You're Better Off..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:09:31 AM AEST
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I hear your words, I know your truth, I've felt My own pain in ruins thru the years of wanting to leave.
One thing I've learned. The only thing I control is my self. So to hell with what say & think. All you need to know is how you and your b/f feel about you. You are good enough for him. You are good enough for this world of pain. Believe in yourself, because you have plenty of us out here who believe in you.
Not to mention-- Does he love you? Well see
you're ahead of the game. Cuz I am Alone still waiting to find the one.

So pick up your head, You're a great person, It just likes to rain alot down here.
God bless you pixie, & best wishes for you.

Re: You're Better Off..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Korax on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:36:18 AM AEST
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Poetry is a pure from of expression from within the soul and I feel that you soul has so many stories to tell.

In the name of hope..never stop telling.

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