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Array ( [sid] => 50814 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2004-06-07 09:41:20 [hometext] => A simple tear of joy or pain, can come crashing down like a flood of rain. [bodytext] => I'm feeling empty and in despair
And it feels as though theres no one really there
I want to reach out and make them see, all that I'v got and all that we could be

But Instead they live their busy lives
And all I have is me, in my own despair, without any care
When they can't even see I'v got something rare
I've got this loneliness that wont go away
Like a pain in my head that just seems to stay
But hopefully soon, someone will come and capture that pain
And just wash it all away like a gust of rain [comments] => 3 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 32 [informant] => SweetRhythm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Alone

Contributed by SweetRhythm on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:41:20 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I'm feeling empty and in despair
And it feels as though theres no one really there
I want to reach out and make them see, all that I'v got and all that we could be

But Instead they live their busy lives
And all I have is me, in my own despair, without any care
When they can't even see I'v got something rare
I've got this loneliness that wont go away
Like a pain in my head that just seems to stay
But hopefully soon, someone will come and capture that pain
And just wash it all away like a gust of rain

Copyright © SweetRhythm ... [ 2004-06-07 09:41:20]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by drinkWATER on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 09:50:53 AM AEST
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good read once again

DW

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 02:16:49 PM AEST
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I've felt like this before many times. Especially the part about people living their busy lives. Nobody seems to be able to slow down and appreciate the finer things in life, the finer people in life. One day, they'll appreciate the jewel I'm sure that you are.
~Carrie~

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:44:14 AM AEST
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thought provoking. good stuff here sad but full of spirit. A++++

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