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Squalid splendor, debasement ensues
Nocturnal butcher elects his queen
Unparalleled talent in the obscene

Foolish supple siren, easy prey
Follows eager to the sinful soiree
Forboding aura, can't seem to detect
Illusive charm, can't seem to suspect

Lay on the mattress, camera turned on
Moans on cue, sanctimonious pawn
Tawdry spectacle, no self-esteem
Arrogant delusions, male supreme

Knife at her throat, such a pageantry
Exticated filth in his diabolatry
Orates defiantly his sweet goodbye
" Nymphomaniac, tonight you die "

Eerily she whisperd back... " I know "

Angelic looker, addicted to pain
Sordid seeker, escape the mundane
Needed a thrill, titillation strange
Uncannily provocative, slightly deranged

Flattery seduced her, stranger's appeal
Flair for sensing what he didn't reveal
Fiendish fetishes, born extremist
Impulsive desires never subsist

Lethal orgy of controversy
Medley of precarious artistry
Taunt and tease, walk the perilous line
Amateur thespian, let your gift shine

Knowledge of doom doesn't ease distress
Exhibitionist, cursed to impress
Transient pleasure, no longer deny
Whispered gleefully " Tonight you die "

Overcome with fear, she managed... " I know " [comments] => 6 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 13 [informant] => brigitte7735 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Snuff Film

Contributed by brigitte7735 on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 04:13:45 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Abandoned warehouse, obstructed views
Squalid splendor, debasement ensues
Nocturnal butcher elects his queen
Unparalleled talent in the obscene

Foolish supple siren, easy prey
Follows eager to the sinful soiree
Forboding aura, can't seem to detect
Illusive charm, can't seem to suspect

Lay on the mattress, camera turned on
Moans on cue, sanctimonious pawn
Tawdry spectacle, no self-esteem
Arrogant delusions, male supreme

Knife at her throat, such a pageantry
Exticated filth in his diabolatry
Orates defiantly his sweet goodbye
" Nymphomaniac, tonight you die "

Eerily she whisperd back... " I know "

Angelic looker, addicted to pain
Sordid seeker, escape the mundane
Needed a thrill, titillation strange
Uncannily provocative, slightly deranged

Flattery seduced her, stranger's appeal
Flair for sensing what he didn't reveal
Fiendish fetishes, born extremist
Impulsive desires never subsist

Lethal orgy of controversy
Medley of precarious artistry
Taunt and tease, walk the perilous line
Amateur thespian, let your gift shine

Knowledge of doom doesn't ease distress
Exhibitionist, cursed to impress
Transient pleasure, no longer deny
Whispered gleefully " Tonight you die "

Overcome with fear, she managed... " I know "

Copyright © brigitte7735 ... [ 2004-06-07 04:13:45]
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Re: Snuff Film (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 04:21:07 AM AEST
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"Taunt and tease, walk the perilous line
Amateur thespian, let your gift shine"

This was exquisitely drawn out. I've now read most of your work to date here, and am always impressed by the way you bring words to my attention in ways which are oft incisive and beautific.

Disturbing in its lasciviousness.
Well done, yet again.

Re: Snuff Film (User Rating: 1 )
by Elena on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 05:40:05 AM AEST
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Excellent verse on a horrifying reality.

Re: Snuff Film (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 03:15:47 AM AEST
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Whoa! Thats so friggin creey!

Lindsey

Re: Snuff Film (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:26:26 PM AEST
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wow. i usually hold a common grudge against scrawls that rhyme. even my own. but the rhyme didn't disrupt the flow or the story at all here. and the story itself was captivating.

ten bags of berry skittles to you.

51

Re: Snuff Film (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:04:56 AM AEST
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very impressive and well thought out and so very captivating, well done
~vermillion~

Re: Snuff Film (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:40:16 PM AEST
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Most captivating, a welln thouught out and structured poem very emotive and powerful
I especially love the lines

''Taunt and tease, walk the perilous line
Amateur thespian, let your gift shine"

Perfection within these words is uncomprehendable

Luke

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