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What it costs
Contributed by
minddancer
on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 06:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You have touched my heart
in a way you will never know
But now you say that it is time for me to go
i gave you my heart
and you threw it away
no matter what i'd do
no matter what i'd say
You think I'm like the others
and becasue of that you can't see
how special you have been to me
I told you i loved you
but you must have thought it couldn't be
cause now we are over you and me
this isn't the way i wanted it to be
i never wanted to be set free
i hope you realize what we've lost
and that it is worth what it costs
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minddancer
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2002-10-14 18:30:00]
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Re: What it costs
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 08:54:32 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Minddancer.. A lovely, sad write. We have all gone through this at one time or another...it will get better...
Keep writing.
Jenni |
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Re: What it costs
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 09:18:27 PM AEST
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This is beautiful and touching, I very much enjoyed it.
~ MoonlitAngel :) |
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Re: What it costs
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by princesspurty on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 08:43:53 AM AEST
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| very beautiful, and sad, love can be cruel, but it can also be kind, hang in there you'll see |
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Re: What it costs
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 10:52:21 PM AEST
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| Very sad write here. It's very well written, I like it alot. |
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Re: What it costs
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by emystar on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 08:51:38 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
I couldn't help but notice that u only have one poem posted and how long it's been since u joined this site.
I really think u should write more as theis is awesome writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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