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SultryRose's Signatures

Sitting on front step
Memories come floating thru.
Jus a tiny little girl
Would sing-n-twirl.

Oh, Daddy dear my
Angel beside my Mom.
Oh, Daddy dear memories
That shall never cease.

After every storm came
Up the hill you'd go
check on your Mom.
"Emy, now don't you play
in the mud, o.k.?"

Thinking back, them times
You could see me any how.
Every time I'd play
Right to the mud, I'd sway.

Looking at it, thru your eyes,
You had as much fun
Watching me jump with glee
Laughing at a muddy site free.

My Dad-n-Mom
J. F. and Helen L.
McCool

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OH, DADDY DEAR 3

Contributed by emystar on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 01:26:41 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

SultryRose's Signatures

Sitting on front step
Memories come floating thru.
Jus a tiny little girl
Would sing-n-twirl.

Oh, Daddy dear my
Angel beside my Mom.
Oh, Daddy dear memories
That shall never cease.

After every storm came
Up the hill you'd go
check on your Mom.
"Emy, now don't you play
in the mud, o.k.?"

Thinking back, them times
You could see me any how.
Every time I'd play
Right to the mud, I'd sway.

Looking at it, thru your eyes,
You had as much fun
Watching me jump with glee
Laughing at a muddy site free.

My Dad-n-Mom
J. F. and Helen L.
McCool

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2004-06-07 01:26:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: OH, DADDY DEAR 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 01:40:20 AM AEST
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Love this, Emy.... thanks or the memories...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: OH, DADDY DEAR 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 03:14:44 AM AEST
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beautifully written,,a friend in words,,spooky

Re: OH, DADDY DEAR 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 10:02:33 AM AEST
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Very touching I cant imagine loosing both I have my father still Thats got to be hard! Christina

Re: OH, DADDY DEAR 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by uchendu on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:06:01 AM AEST
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Good work. I see ur parents were your angels. What a way to immortalise lives. This is cool. Real work of poetry.

Re: OH, DADDY DEAR 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:54:43 PM AEST
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Oh Little Emy..........what a delightful write!
Your father sounds so sweet, and your momma too! They must have died very young...............so sorry dear.
Loved this poem, so real, and the images in my head were like their name......Cool!
Love
consuemom

Re: OH, DADDY DEAR 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 11:31:31 AM AEST
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A very nice loving memory of your Daddy. My how much we miss them, when they are gone. Nice write, take care.... AMber Rose :)

Re: OH, DADDY DEAR 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:50:08 PM AEST
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(((((emy)))) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: OH, DADDY DEAR 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 01:46:45 PM AEST
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I lost my mom 2 yrs. ago i know your hurt.
wonderfulwrite

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