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Array ( [sid] => 50747 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Make Me Wanna Kill [time] => 2004-06-06 20:56:58 [hometext] => This is about that weird feeling that can go on inside where you hate someone that you used to love so much that you just wanna make them feel how much you hurt inside so they know too. [bodytext] => When I hear your voice
It makes me feel like writing
a love song
I hear you voice and my heart
Stops fighting to go along
Your eyes they make me nervous
In a way unkilled by curses
I see you and I see blood
Should we stop now
Or wait till damage is done?
I look at you and my mind goes wild
I want to dig intoyou but my
nails are filed

Everything about you is strange
Everything about you is deadly

So should I restrain myself
Because that's all I can do?
I've gotta strain myself
to keep from lunging at you
I look at you and I still see hate
Behind those eyes
Behind that voice
There's pure heartache
I want my boiling blood to chil
But still...

Everything about you is strange
Everything about you is deadly

But still hsould I say
Forget it
What's done is done?
When all I want to see is blood
I close my eyes to a deadly flood
And you're all that I see [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 6 [informant] => iluvpencils [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
You Make Me Wanna Kill

Contributed by iluvpencils on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:56:58 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



When I hear your voice
It makes me feel like writing
a love song
I hear you voice and my heart
Stops fighting to go along
Your eyes they make me nervous
In a way unkilled by curses
I see you and I see blood
Should we stop now
Or wait till damage is done?
I look at you and my mind goes wild
I want to dig intoyou but my
nails are filed

Everything about you is strange
Everything about you is deadly

So should I restrain myself
Because that's all I can do?
I've gotta strain myself
to keep from lunging at you
I look at you and I still see hate
Behind those eyes
Behind that voice
There's pure heartache
I want my boiling blood to chil
But still...

Everything about you is strange
Everything about you is deadly

But still hsould I say
Forget it
What's done is done?
When all I want to see is blood
I close my eyes to a deadly flood
And you're all that I see




Copyright © iluvpencils ... [ 2004-06-06 20:56:58]
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Re: You Make Me Wanna Kill (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 09:24:03 PM AEST
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this reminds me of a chevelle song. great write.


Re: You Make Me Wanna Kill (User Rating: 1 )
by Winter_Mist2004 on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:40:42 PM AEST
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Very emotional. I feel like this sometimes. Keep writting.

wintermist2004




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