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Array ( [sid] => 50691 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => GoodBye [time] => 2004-06-06 15:59:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The night is cold
The sun is black
I sit in my room
The boys have left
He made me feel like *****
He made me hate myself
I can’t take the pain anymore
Take my life and keep it safe
I can’t do the job myself
The best I can do is cut a deep wound
I’ve done that for a while
People think I’m crazy
I can’t see the pain
So the blood makes me live it
I’m going soon
To a safe it’s not in this town
It’s not in this world
The place I’m going
Is to heaven soon
No wait this is the end
I’m saying goodbye [comments] => 3 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 36 [informant] => jillian_f006 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

GoodBye

Contributed by jillian_f006 on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:59:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The night is cold
The sun is black
I sit in my room
The boys have left
He made me feel like *****
He made me hate myself
I can’t take the pain anymore
Take my life and keep it safe
I can’t do the job myself
The best I can do is cut a deep wound
I’ve done that for a while
People think I’m crazy
I can’t see the pain
So the blood makes me live it
I’m going soon
To a safe it’s not in this town
It’s not in this world
The place I’m going
Is to heaven soon
No wait this is the end
I’m saying goodbye

Copyright Â© jillian_f006 ... [ 2004-06-06 15:59:00]
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Re: GoodBye (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:08:32 PM AEST
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Hey, good write! I can relate. Most of my poetry is about exactly what you are talking about here. I hate it that people feel like they can take control of other people. If you ever need to talk I'm here...just pm me.

Re: GoodBye (User Rating: 1 )
by Arius-Inues on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:26:39 PM AEST
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I love this poem, as you can see most of my poetry is dark or suicidal as well. And as said above if you need to talk, e-mail me at blacksalemrain@hotmail.com, talk to you then.

Re: GoodBye (User Rating: 1 )
by iluvpencils on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 08:41:35 PM AEST
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I can definately relate with the cutting. That's all i do...it makes you feel real again doesn't it?

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