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I cannot see the golden rays
That once settled apon the waters
Warming it for swimming sake
Where has the sun gone?
It seems though the skies are gray
The only thing that is promised lately
Its the same buckets full of rain
Where are you off to, young man?
And then i realized he left to find the sun
Maybe he too noticed its dissapearance
And wanted to be loved by someone
I'll unhitch the trailor
We can leave our weight behind
As we start a quest to find the sun
And a race against time
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Where has the sun gone?

Contributed by imaginary on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:21:34 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Where has the sun gone?
I cannot see the golden rays
That once settled apon the waters
Warming it for swimming sake
Where has the sun gone?
It seems though the skies are gray
The only thing that is promised lately
Its the same buckets full of rain
Where are you off to, young man?
And then i realized he left to find the sun
Maybe he too noticed its dissapearance
And wanted to be loved by someone
I'll unhitch the trailor
We can leave our weight behind
As we start a quest to find the sun
And a race against time

Copyright © imaginary ... [ 2004-06-06 15:21:34]
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Re: Where has the sun gone? (User Rating: 1 )
by Joker17 on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 06:54:25 PM AEST
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Very nice, refreshing, and well written. Good job. I enjoyed both of your posted poems. Keep writing, I'd like to see more.

J Samuelson (Joker 17)

Re: Where has the sun gone? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 03:58:00 AM AEST
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Interesting and topical.

I hate grey skies - they give me sore heads.

I like the fleeting nature of your thought pattern, it works well here.

Keep writing.

Re: Where has the sun gone? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:02:23 AM AEST
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great write.

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