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has a ring
and it’s
name is
Shackles
and it
lives
inside my bra
and it swings
in the shower
and sings

my nipple
has a ring

and I wont
show you
Shackles

any more

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Nipple Ring

Contributed by Ina on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:49:27 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

my nipple
has a ring
and it’s
name is
Shackles
and it
lives
inside my bra
and it swings
in the shower
and sings

my nipple
has a ring

and I wont
show you
Shackles

any more

Copyright Â© Ina ... [ 2004-06-05 22:49:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Nipple Ring (User Rating: 1 )
by youlied on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:17:00 PM AEST
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For some reason this is really funny, I like it.

Re: Nipple Ring (User Rating: 1 )
by TheWordChirugeon on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 05:33:45 AM AEST
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Wonderful. You got a nipple ring. Let me sum up my reaction in two words.

NOBODY CARES!!!!!!!

http://www.winternet.com/~mikelr/flame40.html

Re: Nipple Ring (User Rating: 1 )
by Ina on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:39:19 AM AEST
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Hey dude, I care deeply. seriously. you should see me caring. wow. scary. like i care what you say. oh yep. care.

thanks for the concrete criticism, always good when it is intelligently written.

Re: Nipple Ring (User Rating: 1 )
by TheWordChirugeon on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 09:23:20 AM AEST
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Apparently, you're the only person who cared enough to post something about this poem.

I mean, really, who would care if someone got a nipple ring? Besides a pervert getting his kicks out of badly written yet erotic poetry.

Re: Nipple Ring (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 10:04:30 AM AEST
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great poem ina... i liked it a lot.

Re: Nipple Ring (User Rating: 1 )
by Ina on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:09:39 AM AEST
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Hey World, you cared enough to check it (the poem) again, and then you cared enough to respond to it AGAIN, I see a lot of caring coming from you. You secretly like it...haha. Chill out.

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