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Array ( [sid] => 50575 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loving you, was a turn around [time] => 2004-06-05 20:01:37 [hometext] => I love him...I'm glad he has stuck by me...I love him so much....lol you'll get it... [bodytext] => It's now and forever
my heart you won't dare sever
I love you but don't hate if I ask
Why do you of all people take on this task
I will help you out, and take off this mask
I've never done this for someone
Not after him...I THOUGHT I loved him...I was wrong...
But I guess it was meant to fail
cuz for you, I once again unveiled
our love is strong
nothing I hope...nothing I hope will go wrong
I'm sorry for having such little doubt
but now you know what I'm really about
I'm still scared that you will walk away from everything....
please just for now will you just hold me???
point out all the little things that I should see
I'm just a confused, scared girl...
so many people fall in love
so many people have that symbol of that peaceful "dove"
It's been a while since I've cried
last time I remember you told me what you would do if I died...
you were the missing piece
the piece I thought was forever lost
you gave it back without so muchas any cost
can I ask you why you care so much???
are you like the rest???
what makes you different???
Why are you the "best"???
you threw away your dreams
and said it was for me
how do you think that makes me feel???
do you think if you did that I'd finally feel real???
tell me why do you think I cut???
I cut because I dont think I am real
I cut because I think it be easier if my door was locked and shut
I get out of my daze and look into your eyes
and realize I'm happy now I'm not in my disguise... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 2 [informant] => living_in_my_dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Loving you, was a turn around

Contributed by living_in_my_dream on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 08:01:37 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



It's now and forever
my heart you won't dare sever
I love you but don't hate if I ask
Why do you of all people take on this task
I will help you out, and take off this mask
I've never done this for someone
Not after him...I THOUGHT I loved him...I was wrong...
But I guess it was meant to fail
cuz for you, I once again unveiled
our love is strong
nothing I hope...nothing I hope will go wrong
I'm sorry for having such little doubt
but now you know what I'm really about
I'm still scared that you will walk away from everything....
please just for now will you just hold me???
point out all the little things that I should see
I'm just a confused, scared girl...
so many people fall in love
so many people have that symbol of that peaceful "dove"
It's been a while since I've cried
last time I remember you told me what you would do if I died...
you were the missing piece
the piece I thought was forever lost
you gave it back without so muchas any cost
can I ask you why you care so much???
are you like the rest???
what makes you different???
Why are you the "best"???
you threw away your dreams
and said it was for me
how do you think that makes me feel???
do you think if you did that I'd finally feel real???
tell me why do you think I cut???
I cut because I dont think I am real
I cut because I think it be easier if my door was locked and shut
I get out of my daze and look into your eyes
and realize I'm happy now I'm not in my disguise...




Copyright © living_in_my_dream ... [ 2004-06-05 20:01:37]
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Re: Loving you, was a turn around (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:21:59 PM AEST
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This Was Really Good !!! Good Luck To You Both !!! Thanks For Sharing :-)
LoVe - AnGeL


Re: Loving you, was a turn around (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 01:03:40 AM AEST
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great poem, someones lucky to be cared for that much. A++++




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