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Array ( [sid] => 50568 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Theres no need to shove [time] => 2004-06-05 19:09:37 [hometext] => Plz tell me what u think of it [bodytext] => Shake me
Rape me
Take away my love
Hit me
Kick me
Theres no need to shove
Fight me
Bite me
Cause me all this pain
Say you're sorry
And dont worry
Then next night start again
No one knows why I put up with it
I hate to say it but its true
You rape me, shake me, hit me, kick me,
But i'm still in love with you.

Do you think its love? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 48 [informant] => bohemian_with_a_pen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Theres no need to shove

Contributed by bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:09:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Shake me
Rape me
Take away my love
Hit me
Kick me
Theres no need to shove
Fight me
Bite me
Cause me all this pain
Say you're sorry
And dont worry
Then next night start again
No one knows why I put up with it
I hate to say it but its true
You rape me, shake me, hit me, kick me,
But i'm still in love with you.

Do you think its love?

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Re: Theres no need to shove (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:48:08 PM AEST
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if that is love then i do not want it. your write brought me to sadness so i guess it is an excellent poem in one way; it can get its readers to feel emotion.

Re: Theres no need to shove (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:39:09 PM AEST
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This kind of love is a trajic love. This person can not see the harm-doing in the relationship. You do not love them, you want to stick with them to change them, but sorry to say, a person like this you cannot change. U stay in this relationship for the sake of the other person, and ur scared as well. u have caring feelings for this person, but this cannot be love. Fight for their well-being not for their love, do not put up with this continuous abuse.

Re: Theres no need to shove (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:21:23 PM AEST
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well expressed write, well I suppose if you are in love with the person despite what they do to you it could be consdiered love, but then again I've never really been in lvoe before so I'm not one to give advice...anywho great write

Re: Theres no need to shove (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:04:28 AM AEST
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i think it's love. my ex was just like this poem, but i loved her, in fact i still do. i long for the day she comes back to me, if that ever happens. anyway this was an excellent write, you have a unique style and i loved every line in this poem. i will be reading more of your stuff. oh, and thanks for the recent ments.

Re: Theres no need to shove (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 05:32:13 AM AEST
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heck i wouldn't know, neva been in luv myself, not the lasting kind.
I almost made it a couple times but got scared-n-said not no but **** no!
Most of um were more disturbed than my self and it was hard enuff putting up with myself, I jus couldn't take the abuse. i know I was dishing it out to but realized that I had 2 luv me before I could luv any one else. I'm still working on me but I hope to feel true luv someday.
Very thought provoking write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

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