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The Unknown Love
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 06:58:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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U never know when it will attack,
the poison comes from inside you,
running through your veins,
changing you quickly,
killing you slowly,
eating your insides
till it devours your soul,
and your left with nothing but numbness,
a stillness that no one can break.
It never sleeps,
it keeps feeding,
and no one can stop it.
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Sirena_Degana
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2004-06-05 18:58:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Unknown Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:41:41 AM AEST (User
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There is a fine line between love and hate, love we grow and it nurtures us so, hate is a cancer eating at us. We say goodbye and must let go, to find that nurturing soul.
Good write, I like it you described hate so well. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: The Unknown Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Geykya on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 02:47:24 PM AEST (User
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I love that this poem makes yu think. It flows well and leaves just enuf to the imagination. |
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Re: The Unknown Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 11:25:32 AM AEST (User
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And that was just your first post. WOW !!! That leaves so much open for interpretation, imagination, supposition, and possible debate. I love it. I have read a few of your posts. When time allows, I will return for more !!!
Nazmythian ~ |
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