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suicide
Contributed by
Naughtygurl
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 06:30:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Its hott tonight, I dont think I can fight this feeling.
A feeling of death ,with every breath drawn out of my body.
A slit to the wrist is all it takes to close my eyes.
Then I will dream a sweet dream of serenity.
Freedom from the chains that hold my soul, and strangle my hope.
to watch all the pain run down with blood
washing away all of my fears, with a couple streams of velvet red.
Now i''ll close my eyes and sleep forever, peace at last , I will always be happy, as long as...........only as long as your face is the last thing I see.
Sweet Dreams...............
Copyright ©
Naughtygurl
... [
2004-06-05 18:30:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:11:43 PM AEST (User
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nicely done. sometimes these feelings are to strong to ignore, Ive written some suicide poems on YPDC also. great poem A+++ |
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Re: suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by Seans_Girl on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:14:47 PM AEST (User
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It's really sad but also good. |
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Re: suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by IFoundTheLight on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:19:17 PM AEST (User
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I Love You.. And Very Thing About You.. I Really Hope You Get Better.. I Want You To Be Happy.. But The Summer Should Be Very Good For You.. You Problly Wont Talk To Me All Summer But You Will Be Happy With Your B/f :-D I Like Your Poems .. They Are A Better Way To Express What You Are Feeling Than Actually Doing Them.. I Just Wanted You To Know That I'm Have For You.. When Every You Need Me... Goodnight.. Love Ya |
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Re: suicide
(User Rating: 1 ) by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:03:35 AM AEST (User
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this is very sad. very emotive. You'll find those who can relate will comment, like and understand your poetry. BS x |
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